The Ritual

by Adam L.G. Nevill

Luke.

The change of POV from first to third person is really intriguing

Try as he might, Luke could not picture a small bear.

Lol same

In this place of his salvation, the air tasted unclean.

Ummmmm i dont like this…

And why did they wear their shoes inside the house? he thought, then felt foolish for the irrelevance of such a query.

Lol

He supposed he was near the very end of himself.

Tbh i would have ended it with the knife when i was alone with a fractured skull pages and pages ago.

Odin

OMG just now putting loki, thor and odin together????

Inside his mouth he could feel bits of teeth, like sand, from where he’d fallen onto his face.

Honestly how is this guy still alive

Poor Phil.

Oh yeah, i forgot that there were others before… this section feels like a completely different book

At least these guys really went for it.

Lol fair

but her labia were encrusted with silver piercings.

um… ew "encrusted" really?? you had to use crust lmao

Surtr sat on his chest, facing him, pinned his arms under her buttocks;

naked???

the metal in her bare genitals was cold against his stomach.

um?

considerable body weight

how often does this guy need to remind his readers that this teenage girl is fat and always naked

hard into his shoulders,

she's sitting on his face??

The pressure of blood rushing downwards came into his head quickly.

did we forget that he has a traumatic head injury ? I feel like that blood would kill him or make him pass out immediately

It was his knife.

was this before his failed sacrifice attempt or after?

punched poor Dom off his feet.

oh yeahhhhhh i also forgot that luke was really angry throughout the whole beginning

He was naked so he put on the little stained gown. It smelled of rust. Then he crowned himself, as the old woman wished.

It's giving Midsommar

When?

earning £863 a month after tax at the age of thirty-six did not matter any more.

I would think a near death experience would do that to you