Kindle Notes & Highlights
waiting
*waiting
They'd been
*There had been (or) There was
debit
*debts
What a strange sight the three of them must have made, blowing into town. Four gorgeous women all packed into an SUV.
I know why it's worded this way, but it still sounds weird.
draw
Draw*
It
*it
Molly
*Molly's
be
*but
slide
*slid
look
*looked
*nonexistent
she
*she
*Coke-a-cola
she
*she's
unlessthis is an accent thing?
lifting
*lifted
Shifting from past to preset tense is a common mistake I see in self-published works.
chance
*chance
in
*the?
I'm afraid I don't understand this line
was
*was a
Springs
*Springs
Her clothes were almost exactly the color of varnished wood, serving as superb library camouflage.
No corrections, I just really like this line!
woman’s
*woman's
books...she
Looks odd, no need to hyphen this word for justifying.
cummed,
*came
I know the intent but "cummed" is pretty meme-heavy in tone.
some
*some
They'd
*There would be
report
*report
“That’s crazy.” “That
*That's x2
slide
*slid
torn
*tore
