Here’s another star description that has the same flaw—this time the female lead. CUT TO DAHLIA GRACE IN CLOSE UP. DAHLIA stands in the doorway a moment before joining the party. She is simply beautiful, but there is no ego about her. She has, instinctively, a model’s grace. Seventeen years old, blonde, very tall, she is the most beautiful girl in any room she’s ever entered. Dahlia’s obviously some cutie. And she hasn’t let it go to her head. (We like her for that.) Maybe she’s even going to turn out to be perfect. (Remember, all stars are always perfect.) The problem with both descriptions
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