Red Right Return (Buck Reilly Adventure, #1)

by John H. Cunningham

“We don’t want anyone to you’re involved with us either.”

“We don’t want anyone to you’re involved with us either.” Missing know. “We don’t want anyone to know you're involved with us either."

what did Willy did tell you, anyway?”

what did Willy did tell you, anyway?” Either use punctuation, as a stutter for repeated 'did', or delete the extra did after Willy.

firm…”

Reformat news article, it is very faint to read font.

around…”

Reformat fonts for article.

So were the all the various

Remove first the, So were all the..

How deep they would dig?

Change word order. How deep would they dig?

“I want the U.S. Interests Section. This’ll be an international incident—”

Format second dialog, indent.

“Betty, man, Betty!”

Format, indent.

now.”/p>

Delete format note /p<

said.

Asked, queried, questioned, not said.

boat’s

Single boat, not poss.

it was clear he was that he was toying with the idea.

Change wording of this...it was clear he was that he was toying with the idea. ....it was clear that he was toying with the idea. Or...it was clear he was toying with the idea.

“I still say we stomp him.” “Let me have your phone.”

Break these two dialogues from different people.

Rays.

Possessive, Ray's

How had my life had come to this?

Delete one had, too many.

Have someone

Bad format, fix spacing

juggler.

Jugular, we are talking about the vein in the neck, not a juggler.

but I knew in my heart knew you’d come.”

Missing punctuation or remove second 'knew.'