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The spacious floor plan and marble counter tops would be perfect for the fudge she loved to make.
Literally how?
hard-on
He has a hard on in the car in front of his kids because ge looked at a teacher with green paint smeared on her face i die
strangle
Big macho man only has violent feelings
smirk
I wonder how many times Grey can smirk ffs
spit
Where is the need
this new Adonis had sandy-brown hair that looked as though it had been kissed by the sun and licked by the wind.
Puke
“Hey, Car-Car!
Car car
cock
Ur in a classroom
Could she be the one?
What is happening here
manliest male
She
No pov discipline
dick
Mason pops his boner after only HEARING about her oml
“Sarah’s gone. I hate it and I miss her like crazy sometimes, but she would want us to be happy again, Mace. I don’t think any of us could ever be happy in a relationship on our own. Our home is here, with each other, like mom and the dads. It wouldn’t be fair to the twins or whoever was left behind.”
What in the everloving fuck
to
This book is so weird already and now someome tried to murder the dog
The moment he’d laid eyes on Miss Claira standing by the swing set on the playground he’d lost all his blood and more than half of his brain cells to the demands of his cock.
Lmao
sixth
Only after the 6th huh??
pressed a gentle kiss to the top of her
You dont know this woman omg
Claira giggled again and the melodic sound shot straight to his cock.
wine
You drove here
woman’s
Define this, bitch
What was he thinking?
What are YOU thinking? Omg these guys r nuts and you dont care
“Hey, don’t be sorry.” Matt chuckled as he turned to the stove and removed a covered dish from the oven. “And you’re right, we do get our fair share of attention because of the twin thing. It’s not all that bad.” He wiggled his eyebrows, making her giggle again, disarming her with his effortless charm.
This whole part is so weird and not at all charming
Did he say our wife?
Finally, sense
She lowered her gaze back down to her hands in theirs. Her stomach fluttered and her nipples pebbled beneath her shirt.
said that out loud!
These dumbasses keep saying their thoughts out loud because its the only plot device this writer can use
“That’s it, sweetheart. Taste him. You’re so beautiful.”
Mason is just watching all this unfold
His heart pounded a rapid beat inside his chest in a vain attempt to circulate the blood that had vacated its chambers and flooded to his groin, creating the hardest erection he’d ever had in his life.
How could she have kissed his brother while Mason watched?
Amnesiaville.
Urgh
And how did that work, really? How did they know which one of them was their biological father?
Finally someone is asking the sensible questions
His cock sprang from half mast, where it had pretty much stayed since the last time he saw her, to a full blown hard-on right there in front of his mom.
tugging her back
Let her leeeeaaaave
overwhelmed, scared, excited, aroused and
Do not ever list the things your character is feeling
could imagine her husky voice, in that lazy tone, moaning his name as he licked the evidence of her climax from her pussy, her slick channel milking his tongue as she fell from the orgasm he’d given her.
I cannot believe she is complaining about her broken water heater and he is imagining eating her out
raging hard-on
They weren’t the frizzy, kinky type of curls that women paid to get with those perms. Hers were fat, soft curls that fell around her face and flirted with her shoulders.
Im so tired
The counters are perfect for it.”
Rscyrvugvrgujiht it makes no difference
ass
Entire paragraph about ass
Jesus, could he get any harder?
Perpetual boner. This is day 3
Now, he could detect the faint spice of her arousal
He can SMELL her arousal???
Grey
They are fighting like big macho bois instead of talking about their feelings
He’d also never imagined that his brothers had lost pieces of her, too.
Because you are selfish
“Now who’s bein’ a pussy?” Matt tossed Mason’s words back at him. “Speaking of pussy.” Mason let his words trail off, not sure if he should have raised the subject of his time with Claira around Grey. They would have to talk about her sooner or later. Mason shrugged. Maybe it was time to test the waters. Before he said another word, Grey’s head fell back against the bale of hay. “I knew I smelled her when I walked in here.”
Fucking WHAT
impregnating
Unfortunate choice of words
cock stiffened in anticipation, seconds before he snapped her neck.
Y I K E S
unbuttoning the buttons
What else would he be unbuttoning
censured
Literally th3 weirdest word you could have chosen to put there
Twins!
This is a problem. Incesty
“I’m at your house.
Yikes wtf, who let these two take home an unconscious woman?
waving a white flag.
Do u know what waving a white flag means?
