Powerless (Chestnut Springs, #3)

by Elsie Silver

I drove out to Chestnut Springs and spent the night in one of the small house I bought

Confusing whether there's one or more houses. Houses should be plural if the latter.

“He’d get the fuck outta dodge and go do something for himself.”

Dodge needs a capital letter as it's a place

Everyone I’ve cared about in life has left in me in some way or another—it’s

Sense? Too many words

clench and moan, relieved have him back inside me.

to have him

30 Sloane

Feel this chapter should be Jasper

31 Jasper

Chapter should be Sloane

Im so nervous I feel like I could puke.

Missing Apostrophe . I'm

“That when it comes to you, I’m powerless.”