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“Joel Campbell, eleven years old at the time, began his descent into murder with a bus ride.” Imagine that: all three questions were answered in a single sentence.   1. Whose story is it? Joel Campbell’s.   2. What’s happening here? He’s on a bus, which has somehow triggered what will result in murder. (Talk about “all is not as it seems”!)   3. What is at stake? Joel’s life, someone else’s life, and who knows what else. Who wouldn’t read on to find out?
Wired for Story: The Writer's Guide to Using Brain Science to Hook Readers from the Very First Sentence
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