Powerless (The Powerless Trilogy, #1)

by Lauren Roberts

I may be the thief, but I’m regularly robbed of rest.

I bet the author thought this was a very clever line. Punny.

rough scraps of fabric until I finally raised a white cloth in surrender.

Another one! Same paragraph !

my fingers catch on the inside lining of his vest. No, not just the lining—a secret pocket. I feel a folded piece of parchment within, and on an impulse I can’t explain or justify,

So she's just fumbling around in his pocket, long enough to find a SECRET pocket, and he doesn't notice? I can't stop rolling my eyes. 🙄

displaying dimples on both his cheeks. I

He has dimples. We get it. This is the third mention of them in the last few paragraphs.