To Ashes and Dust (Shadow and Moonlight, #3)

by Luna Laurier

The self pitty is too much and it’s getting rather annoying. The whole not telling him is dragging on too much and making the self pitty unbearable

The whole thing about learning about the houses should have happened so long ago. A good time would have been when they were mentioning about how she was going to learn the different abilities.

“I honestly don’t really remember. It was probably just a guard or something.” Perhaps. She was the

The changes and dismissal of topics is so abrupt and frequent

Not unless I wasn’t something that would hold them back...

Adding too much random complications that really aren’t needed

Finding this plot point to be uninteresting. The author just randomly reminds us about it. It really doesn’t even look like a main plot point just a random plot that isn’t as important as it should be. It really should be a bigger focus in the story than it is right now.

Do you know how silly it is to act like this was a big problem when the main character had already suggested it multiple times already?