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“Colton doesn’t tolerate disrespect, Ava. Being his enemy will be extremely bad for your reputation.”
REPUTATION??? ITS COLLEGE WHO THE FUCK CARES 😭😭
“Jordan said they’re the most popular guys on campus.”
is this just a high school y/n fic poorly disguised as a college romance
Jordan P: Your cock fits my mouth perfectly. Last night proved that better than anything.
1. no one would ever text this… ever
2. jordan, have some self-respect
Her reaction makes me curious. She doesn’t come across as the disobedient type. She’s a good girl who tries hard to make everyone believe she’s a rebel. It’s obvious.
y/n
My freaking dick is getting excited just looking at her; hardness pokes through my jeans. Yeah, so much for not being a horny stud.
😟
Never in my life did I imagine being kicked out of my first college party. Not by that idiotic guy. I’m going to be a laughingstock on Monday.
this is so y/n freshman in high school coded…
“You asked if it was good…” His hot breath on my thighs sends tingles down my spine. “It was fucking perfect.” The second he touches me, I close my eyes, enjoying his caress. I arch my back, immersing myself in the moment and the man. Coming here with my best friend’s brother was the best decision I made all week.
i support this bc colton is actually a little bitch
And I hate being disappointed after sex. It’s like a punch to the gut, a low blow to my confidence.
no one asked #silencemen
I didn’t expect her to like this kind of music. She doesn’t seem the type.
that’s because shes not like other girls
I feel my dick hardening in my pants, and it makes me angry.
makes me angry too because literally no one asked
“And he has zero respect for girls. He thinks we’re good only for sex.” “He’s even more disgusting than I thought.”
colton literally does the same thing dipshit
He reminds me of Draco Malfoy from the Harry Potter movies: platinum blond with blue eyes, but, unlike Tom Felton, he’s not attractive at all.
have you SEEN tom felton??
He shrugs, licking his lips. Does he have a boner? The bulge in his groin becomes more visible.
naw even the FL’s pov gotta inform me about the dicks
If she were mine, I’d never share her.
if you were in a monogamous relationship with her u wouldn’t let her date others??? unheard of
“It’s amusing that you still have no idea how much power you have around here.” Benson puts a hand on my shoulder. “People will see her as your enemy. A target of derision and talk. I don’t know what Monday will bring for her, but I’m sure it won’t be nice. No one wants to be on your bad side, especially girls.”
are we in high school
The first week after the party was strange. People whispered behind my back and pointed in my direction. When I walked into a room, everyone would fall silent. It was like my presence shut down every conversation. A few of my classmates stopped talking to me, and one even refused to be my study partner in one of my classes.
this book is the college fantasy of a preteen
Something cold hits my skin, and I yelp. The fuck? I look down, and it’s like I’m a character from Glee. A fucking slushy.
NOT A GLEE REFERENCE
I wanted to twirl her around and kiss her just as much as I wanted to spank her for her behavior.
die
She has a perfect body, but her tits… Damn, her full boobs looked so good in her beige and pink bra that I was literally forcing myself not to stare. Even the glimpse I had was enough to make my dick rock solid. I want her so badly, like I’ve never wanted anyone in my life.
this book has got to have been written by a white cishet man
I’m as single as a Pringle.”
2016 wattpad y/n ass line
A beast in my chest roars,
rawr
“He’s a good one. Fucking his sister’s best friend doesn’t make him a bad boy all of a sudden.” Clay gives me a look. “Dude, consent is a thing. He didn’t force himself on her; he didn’t manipulate her into sex. She wanted it.”
REAL!! 💯
It has long sleeves and a little cut-out neckline, giving me a great view of her cleavage. Her tits look perfect, and I can’t wait to see them without all these clothes.
i hate men
Taylor Swift’s “Midnight Rain” plays in the background, and warmth spreads through my veins.
ava is real for this
“First, Thompson, you suck. Second, next time the girl you like hooks up with another guy because you were a damn coward and couldn’t make a move on her, don’t take it out on her. That’s a hundred percent on you.” My jaw drops. What the actual fuck?
why is clay the best character
“You’re such a brat, bestie.”
this was written by a 14 year old
“I’m a nerd. I love reading books, annotating them, and saving my favorite moments in highlights. So I quote things I remember from a TV show? It’s not a big deal.”
im nerdy. im a nerd. i dont fit in and i dont wanna fit u
in. have you ever heard me not quote tv shows? thats nerdy
“I told you, Ava. We aren’t going to have sex in the movies.” “And I told you that sounded like a challenge.” Why is he so stubborn? He wants it just as much as I want it.
NO FUCKING IN THE MOVIE THEATER!! an usher is gonna have 2 clean up after yall
“There’s nothing ugly about you, Colt.” “You don’t know—” Ava interrupts me, grinning. “True, but I intend to fix that.”
not the “i can fix him”
“Fictional men never disappoint me, unlike real ones.”
real but also such cringe dialogue
“Awesome. I still kinda ship you two together.”
what 22 year old man says this
everything in this story is exactly how I like it. Characters who are realistic and flawed, a plot that tears my heart to shreds, then repairs it with the happiest ending. The vibe this book gives me is what I’m looking for.
not the vibe of this book tho
“Rodgers is a manwhore,
love me a manwhore (matt murdock)
“Son, your emotions are valid. You shouldn’t be scared or embarrassed of them. You lost someone very important to you without losing them. This pain you’re holding on to…it’s eating you alive, and you need to let it out.”
dax dilf
“You sound so bossy, and I want to call you daddy…and
die
Rodgers is always by her side, ready to worship the ground she walks on and shower her with compliments. He’s whipped, and he isn’t afraid to show that to anyone.
clay supremacy
“I don’t have a condom with me.”
if theres a pregnancy scare ill kms
I hurriedly take my phone out of my pocket, launch the calendar, and stare at it in disbelief and growing fear. I’m four days late.
IM KILLING MYSELF
Well…fuck. I’m pregnant.
this wattpad ass story the fuck
“You should prepare yourself for life as a single mom. Or get an abortion. Yeah, better get an abortion. Bringing an unwanted child into the world is the stupidest idea ever.”
you can tell jordan is fictional because NO ONE TALKS LIKE THIS
“I don’t care what you say, Ava. You’re mine. And soon enough, you’ll be proudly flashing a ring on your finger so the whole fucking world—so every single person on this planet—will know you’re Colton Thompson’s wife.”
what a very weird thing to say to someone breaking up with you…
“I love you, Ava. I love you more than fucking hockey, and for someone like me, that sounds like the ravings of a lunatic. If anything, I’m obsessed with you, because any time I get to taste you, I crave you even more. You are the only girl I want, the only one I’ll ever need. And I’ll do anything for you to give me another chance. Please, Ava.”
wattpad ass confession
“First, I love your dad, for real.
i love her dad too #daxisadilf
Will you be my wife?” “Yes,” she murmurs as I take her hand and slowly put the ring on her finger.
she is eighteen and you guys have been together for like 3-4 months and you managed to impregnate her the one time you dont use protection….
“They can all go to hell. I don’t care. I would’ve married you anyway. Pregnant or not.”
again— 3-4 months
It’s not about you. It’s about my grandchild, and I intend to be the best grandpa in the world, even if the competition is tough.
dilf behavior
“In your dreams,” my hubs comments,
this can’t be a real line
“I started a book, but it bored me to death. It literally lulled me to sleep. I don’t know why I’m still trying to give stories with childhood friends to lovers trope a chance. It’s one of the most unrealistic things in the world, and you’ll never change my mind,”
me reading this entire book
There was a reason Mom didn’t leave Dad after her one night with Leo, and that reason was love—love they were able to reignite when Mom returned home from the facility.
an actual criticism i have for this book is that the author relies way too much on telling rather than showing. like… passages like these are so clunky and makes me feel dumb as a reader because things like this shouldn’t have to be explained word for word but instead described and integrated into the storytelling so that it is understood by the end
