Embrace (The Violet Eden Chapters, #1) in Keep Calm And Read A Book

Jan 22, 2013 XXK rated it liked it

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Uh hum.
2.5 stars.
Talk about corny. Classic teenage love story. Guy knows girl. Guy is usually older then he seems. Guy lies to the girl. Girl runs away crying. Stalker has sex with girl. Girl likes stalker. Stalker not what he seems. Girl goes back to the first guy. Yawn.

I mean, come on Jessica Shirvington. Can't you do better? Nothing interesting really. I swear, it pretty much took me about two months to even look at the second chapter after the first.

Firstly, why can't you have more interesting names? Violet (the colour.) Lincoln (the president.) Phoenix (A fire bird.) Griffin (Similiar to a made up bird.) I vote you use something like....Xeldare in your new book. No, not Humphry. Not Justin. Not Uncle Sam. Ravelton Wereby Underlock. Now there's a name I'd love to see.

Secondly, try to be a little more original. This is quite similar to a book called Angel Evolution, about a girl who falls in love with a guy, the guy lies to her, she meets a demon, they start to look at each other all lovey dovey then she's in a battle for no real reason, dying because both of the guys couldn't be bothered with protecting her.

Thirdly, she's not exactly a good character is she? She is stuck up, pretty much, and a bitch. No need to say more, it's almost ridiculous how stupid your characters can be. No offence. :) But how can that not be offensive XXK? Don't know. Never mind.

I'm just giving you 2.5 stars cause she nearly dies in the end. I like it when protagonists nearly die.

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