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Family Ties
By: Ottilie Weber
ISBN: 9780982981696
Available Format: Paperback, ebook
Published April 1, 2011 by Buck County

My Rating: ★★★★☆ (3.5 rounded up! )

A long, long time ago Emma was a young German heiress with a fiery will of her own. When she was told she was to marry the arrogant, abusive Wilhelm, Emma decided to take her fate into her own hands and escape to America. Several generations later, Abby, the first female child of her great-grandmother’s line, is living her normal, ho-hum teena Family Ties
By: Ottilie Weber
ISBN: 9780982981696
Available Format: Paperback, ebook
Published April 1, 2011 by Buck County

My Rating: ★★★★☆ (3.5 rounded up! )

A long, long time ago Emma was a young German heiress with a fiery will of her own. When she was told she was to marry the arrogant, abusive Wilhelm, Emma decided to take her fate into her own hands and escape to America. Several generations later, Abby, the first female child of her great-grandmother’s line, is living her normal, ho-hum teenage life in small town New Jersey. Just when she thinks her biggest problem is her best friend ogling the slutty waitress at the restaurant they both work in, Abby is kidnapped and taken back to her great-grandmother’s homeland to pay a debt from the past. She gets to experience firsthand what Emma endured so many years ago. Will she also be able to escape or will she pay the ultimate price?

While I enjoy the shifts of POV between Abby, Emma, and Cory, Abby and Cory speak so similarly. I just would have liked for Cory’s voice to be a bit more distinct and more masculine. I think Emma’s could also have been taken a bit further since she was alive in a time and society where things were much more formal and stiff.

The manuscript needs a bit of polishing to really make it shine. The bones are definitely there; it just needs a little dusting and fluffing. There were some moments of repetitiveness—words and thoughts. Occasionally there were sentences that could have been left out or reworded so they flowed a little better. If I turned off my critical eye, however, the underlying story was absolutely unique and riveting.

The overall plot was fantastic. I’m a big historical fiction fan, so Emma’s bits were my favorites. I love the fairy tale quality of the story being interwoven with the modern day, and Miss Weber does a terrific job putting them together. There is no doubt she has a talented, creative mind, and I think she will only improve as her writing career continues.

Ottilie will be the guest author on JournalStone’s Blog Talk Radio show, JournalJabber, this Tuesday, September 13th at 8PM CST. You’ll find me keeping the chat room straight. Tune in to hear all about Miss Weber, her writing, and probably toilet snakes.
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Apr 20, 2011 Books Ahoy rated it it was amazing

OMG! This is officially one of my favorite books, its right up with Twilight! I loved to different POV especially the POV of Emma so when can see how it was in her situation and also so we could see the parallel between Emma and Abby. I absolutely loved the relationship between Cory and Abby and how they turned out. Very cute :). This book gets really intense at times with the kidnapping and how that situation turns out. I felt really bad for Abby and was really mad at Wilhelm! I don't want to g ...more

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Nov 09, 2011 Ottilie rated it it was amazing · (Review from the author) · review of another edition

A fair amount of the books here on Goodreads has reviews by their authors, and I have been putting this off because I do not know how I feel about that. So here is a review of my own book? I have had a loving relationship with Fairy Tales my whole life, and when I write I'm sure that seeps into my wording. I enjoy history so I'm sure that shows up in the story as well... I wrote Family Ties when I was 16 years old then when I was 20 I did a little tweeking, such as editing, adding scenes, and ev ...more

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