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For a debut novel, this was outstanding. On the other hand, there were a couple of areas in which the writing could have been improved.
First, the romance side-plots. Having one "Romeo and Juliet" story within a book is okay, but more than one is a bit much, especially if one of them just doesn't work. In this case, there is one of those, one which requires two of the main characters to act like horny idiots for too many pages.
Second, the world building is a bit iffy at times. For instance, I cou ...more
First, the romance side-plots. Having one "Romeo and Juliet" story within a book is okay, but more than one is a bit much, especially if one of them just doesn't work. In this case, there is one of those, one which requires two of the main characters to act like horny idiots for too many pages.
Second, the world building is a bit iffy at times. For instance, I cou ...more
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There is a mostly good book here, and it’s heavy. I am waiting for book two.
Apr 11, 2023
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marked it as to-read
