Nascent (The Stork Tower, #1) in LitRPG Forum

Mar 28, 2018 Naomi rated it really liked it

Shelves: scribd, litrpg

Thoroughly enjoyable.

Several annoying misspellings and other various typos.

The ending wasn’t a cliff exactly... well, maybe a cliff exactly, but I felt no urgency due to plot armor.

But like I said, thoroughly enjoyable, so on to book 2!

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Feb 14, 2020 Wilhelm Eyrich rated it it was amazing

What a future Cordon has created here. It is both dystopian and utopian and is a wonderful story with much more room to grow. It creates and asks wonderful and troubling questions about AI and how we are to use them, both as people, rich or poor, and as governments. One of the plots that is created shows a very scary but I think realistic situation that will need to be carefully looked at in our own world in the future.

This story/world is vast and I expect a lot from the next books. 9/10

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Jan 09, 2020 Frankie Saxx added it

Shelves: litrpg-challenge

Things I enjoyed: The Stork Tower theme, the world building, Leah is competent and rational and conflicts and obstacles aren't based on her making stupid choices or lack of communication.

Things I didn't enjoy: Leah is a very Mary Sue character who never fails or struggles to overcome obstacles. It removes a lot of the tension when you know by halfway through the book she's just going to breeze through.

Three stars: I liked it, enough to continue the series and maybe recommend it, but not enough ...more

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