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The stories had fun premises, and the author clearly has a great imagination, but the awkward writing drags the stories down. Sometimes, they got very confusing. In one story where there was a female teacher convincing a female student to deliver a message to the student’s father, I became very confused, because the author used female pronouns multiple times without clarifying which character was being described. The student was instructed to go home and tell her father she loved him. Which natu
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As the subtitle tells us, this is a collection of short stories aimed at young children. There are some cute ideas in here, but the manuscript definitely needs to be sent to a proofreader. The accompanying art is also childlike, which is perhaps intentional but honestly, I don't know. For those looking for simple tales to entertain kids at bedtime and want something different, this could do the trick, but the presentation needs some work.
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