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Who's Making Love To Your Wife While You're Out Making Love

David Murdock

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Apr 09, 2013 Justin Melter rated it did not like it

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I received this copy as a GoodReads First Reads Winner. Thanks to both David Murdock and GoodReads for sending this out!

Who's Making Love To Your Wife While You're Out Making Love is essentially a very down to earth guide directed towards men concerning how not to cheat on your wife with a pinch of god thrown in through script For the FULL REVIEW please visit my new review site LazyDay.CA! Here's the link, just scroll to the bottom for Fatman's additions! http://lazyday.ca/whos-making-love-to...

I received this copy as a GoodReads First Reads Winner. Thanks to both David Murdock and GoodReads for sending this out!

Who's Making Love To Your Wife While You're Out Making Love is essentially a very down to earth guide directed towards men concerning how not to cheat on your wife with a pinch of god thrown in through scripture quotation. It goes into a variety of Do's and Don'ts yet never seems to really stray far from the same main points of which there are only a few. Basically, If you are out chatting with the constantly mentioned woman down the street (or one of those overly seductive looking truck-stop waitresses) and ignoring your woman, you are officially cheating on your wife! Yes, even if you AREN'T doing her! There is the title broken down and the book as well.

As for a review I can't say I enjoyed it. The editing was terrible, with most sentences being randomly broken apart..... ...all...the... time.. the dots got to me by page 8. I wondered if there was ever going to be a comma and it was a real strain on the eyes. Randomly this problem ("God then created commas!" Justin 3:16) seemed to correct itself but the .... still..... remained.... Chapters ended and then continued on, very weird. Verses which were quoted were at one moment in a pretty box with font and then the next were Psalms 7:10 then Genesis 1:2 and then Psalm 11:11 (GR didn't keep the formatting but bolds, italics, etc). No continuity to any of the text overall. I really don't want to keep dwelling on this. Really needs a second edit, that alone made me almost put it down 3 seperate times. This was just way too repetitive, you can only say the same thing so many times. Perhaps this explains the length of the novel, under 50 pages. The advice itself at times was good and taken from obvious experience but I didn't always agree or understand with how quoted scripture would relate to the previous text. I just don't think this book was ready to be published yet. I think it needs a good professional edit and re-release.

Once again thank you to both GoodReads and David Murdock for sending this out. I really appreciate the GoodReads program and my site LazyDay.CA wouldn't be here without it!

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