Ruth’s Comments (group member since Dec 16, 2012)

Ruth’s comments from the Above All That Is Random book club group.

good idea! it could be a romance! or something else...

you guys got any ideas for it?

yep!

You can't be a judge and be in the contest. The Feb. Theme will be introduced on Feb. 1st.

I cast my vote for Liane's story.

and yes, both of you can participate in the February contest.

I like the way Roxy carries thoughts all throughout her story, with the rustling and the unicorn repeating through the story. The way the family has a reason to believe the unicorn is good. The ending leaves you hanging, which I like. The story could use more elaboration, however.

Liane's story is very original, and keeps you interested the whole way through. She does a good job with describing things without too much detail or too little detail.

awesome!!! Thanks so much for joining! Hopefully they'll be more activity soon

Hi Sofie!!!!

We should have a chat about the pros and cons of both, I think. This might take a bit of trial and error before we get it perfect, I'm new to this sort of thing.

a vote?

Ok, guys, the contest is closed now, and we need to pick the winner.

the January contest is now closed. The winner will be announced on January 25th. Don't be offended if your writing is not picked.

great!

ok, that was my thought. We need Jane's opinion now.

Oh, a tidbit I forgot to mention, can everybody please title their work? Thanks!

ok. Does anybody think it matters that Lione's story has 800 words?

here we can talk about the entries

ok :D so sorry about not having that topic yet, I had to get offline in a hurry

let me talk to the other judges, I think it's fine, but I want to get their opinion. Thanks so much for entering!

you're welcome :D 100 words isn't too big of a deal