Grace’s Comments (group member since Sep 29, 2012)

Grace’s comments from the I AM NOT IMMATURE! I JUST KNOW HOW TO HAVE FUN ;) group.

And finally, the short story trilogy is completed:

Inordinate: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Exorbitant: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

And finally, Irrevocable: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Check it out and post your critiques! On the story, though, NOT here. Please and thank you :D

xSo I finally got around to writing a sequel to my first posted short story, Inordinate. This one's called Exorbitant (Brian's POV) and there will be a third posted later today or tomorrow called Irrevocable.

In case you missed the first one: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Exorbitant: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

I would love reviews and suggestions on how to improve - even negative reviews are welcome! Please comment ON THE STORY, though, not here.

Wrote a new short story from the time of the Titanic called This Weightlessness. It's only four short chapters so I'd love for you guys to take a look and tell me what you think I can improve on! http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... (comments ON THE STORY please, not here)

The link below is of a short prologue I wrote of a book I'm interested in writing. My plot so far has many gaps though, so I'd love for you guys to read this and comment (on the story, NOT here) with any ideas you have that might work for it.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Ben wrote: "Friends are like trees...



They fall down if you hit them multiple times with an axe
Lol, I my sister said that to me when I told her to talk to her old friend."

Hands down the best quote I've ever heard. Thank you for that.

Added more to my book Something Else Entirely! Go check it out, and read from the beginning if you haven't yet!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

Tell me what you think - if you like it or hate it, and tell me why :) I want to improve, so tell me anything that might help! (Comments on story PLEASE, not here)

The Edge (a short story): http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3.... Please check it out and give me critiques (if you don't like it, tell me WHY so I can improve!) Comments ON THE STORY please, not here.

I love writing, acting, and singing :) I've written a lot of stuff but here's the most recent one: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3.... It's called "The Leap We Must Take."

Check out my other one's too if you can :) Here's the link to all my stories: http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/5.... If you can read and comment on "Like The Stars," that would be most appreciated!

Also, here's a video of me SINGING when I was 11 years old :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VhoxsQ...