W.I.T (writer in traning)’s Comments (group member since Apr 06, 2012)

W.I.T (writer in traning)’s comments from the H.A.R.P Program group.

Name: Selena Knight
Age: 18
Appearance: Looks a lot like Selena Gomez, except she has cobalt blue eyes
Personality: Sweet, reclusive, artistic, really smart
Bio: Her parents split when she was five. Her mother couldn't handle the pressure of being a single mom, so she handed Selena off to her dad and left to travel the world. But Selena's dad died in a car accident, and Selena has since then been living with some friends she meets along the way. She graduated from high school at the top of her class, got excepted to Standford, but had to ask for them to wait for her when she learned her mother had fallen ill in Egypt. Her mom died, and she now works at a singer in the diner Kendra waitresses at, Local Dinner. She loves singing, and anything musical.
Family: All dead.
Horse: Sometimes rents a horse from Silver Lining Ranch.
Other: She loves drawing almost as much as singing, and hopes to get excepted into either Juliard or NYU.

"She's beautiful, Miki whispered. She let the mare sniff her hand. "Hey Caramel." As she was stroking her mane, she saw Chou stalk off towards the bunkhouse, looking even more emo and angry than usual.
"On the forecast ladies and gentlemen, another eruption from the highly explosive Mount Chou, Miki muttered to herself.

Miki walked in, and saw Dusting feeding one of the horses. She walked over.
"What's her name? she asked Dustin, stretching her hand out under the horse's velvety, chocolate brown nose.

Nicole wrote: "amelie, what happened to ur name???!??!?!?!?!?"

((i changed it. one, i am full of wit, so this is a pun, two, i am in fact a writer in training nicole you know that))

((OK kids, move this to the Barn, because that's where we are right now. Move along))

((yeah, they're working and nicole i did, but all it did was show a little "x"

((cool! i wish i could see her, but the links you posted aren't working for me :( ))

((i do too, this is going to be interesting))

((cool, but give the horse a name please :) ))

Piper was shocked at the incompetence of this girl.
"You obviously do or else you would listen to me and, also, you have to pass a screening in order to get here. Were you too busy with the immigration process to do it?" Piper was angry, but she knew her biting words were mean, and that Chou was not going to like it.

((remember the movie and me looking like i was mauled by a bear, and your hairdo?? teehee, i need to see how the edditing is going so far i should go over to your house))

(( gtg brb in an hour nicoley, and my voice is not high and cheery))

"OK, if you do, you will fall out of th saddle, or freeze. We do ride at night. And, if you hate riding, and if you seem determined to hurt, traumatize, and ruin these horses, why are you here?"

((Nicole i think we should move this to the barn because that is where we are right now should have mentioned that earlier sorry))

Piper put Dusty in his stall and immediatly ran over to help Chou, who was fighting to handle her mustang.
"Chou, for one, you just got here, it's amazing you can ride at all. Second, this is a mustang! This horse has been abused and doesn't trust any one of us. What made you think you could hop on her back and just gallop on the range? Do you know what would happen if she saw a wild horse herd? She would kick, buck, and rear until you fell off, and then she would run to join the herd, and be lost forever! And so would the money that comes from the program!" Piper took a breath, than turned to the furious girl.
"Look, if you wanna ride, just ride one of the stable horses. And ask permission. You are not endearing yourself to this horse with the way you are acting. Your job is to make the horse trust people again. Be calm, be gentle, and," she glanced at Chou's outfit. Her sneakers, her tank top, her shorts. "Put actual riding clothes on." Chou glared at her. "You know, you wouldn't be here if you hadn't commited crimes that were too serioius for juvee. Although, the most serioius one, you never got caught for." Chou stared at her, shocked. "I know all about it Chou. I do. I had to learn about you, to see if you were a danger to the horses and people. I convinced my dad you weren't, but, if I were you, I wouldn't pull something as serious as murder around these parts." She straightened up, waiting for the eruption that was bound to come from the explosive Mount Chou.

Awesome!!

Piper rode up to them on Dusty.
"El, Chou! Calm down! You guys are here to get better, not to fight!" She glared at both of them. She turned to El.
"El, I don't think Jackie's ready to ride. Look at the poor thing." Jackie's eyes were rolling and her mouth was foaming. "You need to be gentle with her." Both girls glared at her.
"It's not my fault you guys got sent here! You're the ones who committed crimes. And on top of that, you have goddamn super powers!" Piper took a deep breath.
"Now. come back to Silver Lining and get ready. Lunch is in a few minutes." She wheeled Dusty around, ready to gallop away.

Name: Piper Cole
Age: 14
Appearance: dark chestnut hair she puts in a new hairstyle every day, deep green eyed, tan skin, tall, pretty
Personality: kind, mellow, but if someone threatens her family or horses, she can be mean, she is protective, super smart and athletic
Bio: her parents own the ranch, and she'd has had a very happy childhood.
Family: Mom, dad, lots of horses and ranch workers that she considers her family.
Horse: Gorgeous palomino named Golden Dust, Dusty for short
Other: loves to ride with the mustangs, and camp with a friend or family member under the stars.

Name: Miki Sordino
Age: 15
Appearance: White blond hair she cut super short, big ice blue eyes, pale skin, short, wiry, and, even thou she's only 15, she is what boys call hot.
Personality: tough exterior, but it hides a broken heart. However, she absolutely adores horses. She is smart, but sly.
Crimes: theft, assault.
Bio: her father divorced her mother, then moved to Russia. Her mother remarried three times, and each time put her husband's needs before Miki's. Se got sent to Nevada because her mother's husband was starting to beat her, so she punched him and dislocated his jaw.
Family: mother, father, three stepdads
Ability: Can get glimpses of the future
Horses assigned to: Star, a mustang with a golden chestnut color and a white star on his forehead.
Other: Loves long walks on the beach and art.

((Cool charrie))

You can find mustangs or horse rustlers here. What an adventure.