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I'll share some of my comments tomorrow since I have a crazy morning tomorrow, but for now let me just say, I love how this one passage in chapter three describes Emma as a person: "She was so busy admiring those soft blue eyes, in talking and listening, and forming all these schemes in the in-betweens, that the evening flew away at a very unusual rate (...)". I think the "schemes in the in-betweens" is such an accurate portrayal of what Emma's actions are centered around and when I read this sentence I thought that this is a gem of precise description.

I'm trying to structure our group reading at least a little bit, but I'm not sure what reading pace would be comfortable for you guys. Would you be okay with reading 10 chapters a week? Emma has 55 chapters in total. Let me know what you think!

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Now I know why I forgot my username. Seriously, why did I call it pumpkinsoupexplosion?