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"On page 127, So far I've found the prelude, prologue, and first chapter to be overdone in fighting/action with very little discernible narrative. From there I'm feeling as though I've been thrust into a setting that so far makes little sense to me. The impression with these early chapters can be summed up as "this could have been an email."" — Oct 05, 2024 01:21PM
"On page 127, So far I've found the prelude, prologue, and first chapter to be overdone in fighting/action with very little discernible narrative. From there I'm feeling as though I've been thrust into a setting that so far makes little sense to me. The impression with these early chapters can be summed up as "this could have been an email."" — Oct 05, 2024 01:21PM
