Carrlene Ray’s Comments (group member since Dec 05, 2020)

Carrlene Ray’s comments from the KOTLC group.

Reason to like Fitz: HE HAS THE CUTEST ACCENT EVER and I remembered that yesterday and had a breakdown, spamming my non kotlc friend for 30 minutes about how great he is

Wait WHAT!? How did I miss this? What page is that? I NEED this!!!

Someone please give me a reason not to reread Flashback because I have a million better things to do and I’m in the middle of like three books, but I need more FITZPHIE

Yeah, since the movie rights have been sold I haven’t found any new updates

I’ve been off goodreads a lot for that too. I’m working on prep for my novel and I haven’t had much time to be active here. But hello, Lorain! It’s nice to meet you

@books are life, I needed that hope today 😂 Sophitz neeeeds to get back together 😭

@books are life, that is literally my LIFE! I’m hardcore Fitzphie, but then Keefe goes and does his whole annoying little “good for Sophie thing” and it messes with my head 😂

I know!!!! And here’s what’s scaring me: they’ll obvi defy Keefe and get him back, epic showdown with Gisela, blah blah... but that’s too predictable. And that’s what’s scaring me. There’s no way Shannon would be that predictable. Can Keefe really be gone for good? (Doubt it but like...)

That is PHENOMENAL! Legitimately how did you learn to draw like that? I’ve been wanting to learn to draw for a long time but could hardly draw a stick figure for my life 😂

Yeah a solid original cast would be great

Awesome!!

Awesome! I’ve never read WOF though, so I might not be the best person to help out. Although I think it’s great

@books are life, mood

I think you did a really nice job, the introduction is really intriguing. One thing I noticed was the use of the words “unspoken secrets” twice in one sentence which is fine but seems a little repetitious. You could change “Will death bring unspoken secrets to the surface or will unspoken secrets shatter this world?” to “Will death bring hidden secrets to the surface or will unspoken secrets shatter this world?” Or “Will death bring hidden secrets to the surface or will they remain unspoken and shatter this world?” All in all, you did a really nice job. Your story sounds incredible!!

This is completely random, but this ship is great, because no matter how you mash their names, the sounds don’t change. Ex: Jephie, Soffy

OH! Sorry I got the names mixed up I’m definitely Rex and Amy. That’s what I meant. But yeah, Rex and Amy would be iconic

Right! Idk how I got those mixed up, read it as Forbidden Cities. I was too excited to think straight 😂

Ahh Amy and Bex would be so cute because UNLOCKED SPOILERS (view spoiler)[ with Bex being talentless and Amy being human, Bex could move to the Lost Cities and blend in perfectly (hide spoiler)] and oh my goodness this is a whole way too perfect love story! So like Amy could be visiting the Lost Cities, and they fall in love, and then since (view spoiler)[ Bex is already talentless and can’t have a good match he moves to the Lost Cities to rebel like a true Dizznee and chase after his burning love for Amy, and then they help bridge the gap between humans and elves! (hide spoiler)]

I just got back and the fact that someone made a topic for this is the best thing ever. New members will be SO confused 😂

And black hair or dark brown I think