aXeL’s Comments (group member since Sep 11, 2009)

aXeL’s comments from the Ms. J's Class L group.

task 2.
1-introduction:writing to persuade you that indoor pollutants can cause helth risks, and to tell you about ways of these risks can be reduse.
2-reason #1:why indoor pollutants are risks.(with citation from text #1.)
3-reason #2:why indoor pollutants are risks.(with citation from text #1.)
4-summary:of ways indoor pollutants are risky, and how to reduse these risks.

its on taks 1.
the topic that we will be listenig is about Madame Marie Curie.
listen to an account by writer and historian Barbara Goldsmith about Madame Marie Curie and a successful scientist.

Axel Alcantara

According to this quote "in the dark time, the eye begins to see..." This is connected to the great book "Frederick Douglass" in the way that Frederick was a slave and he was living the very bad dark times.

Then Frederick started to see the life he deserved. After that he started to learn how to read and write to make him the person that he deserves to be. Then Frederick planted that he was going to make them not to be slaves no more. He was going to do that by teaching them how to read and write too. However, he could not make it. Because it was too hard for him to take them all at the same time. Then he set him self free by escaping from being slave and also from living a dark time.

It connects to the other book name “Stuart Little”. It connects to this book in the way that the main character name Stuart was living a street live, and from there he learned bad thing and not so much good things. However, Stuart Little is no ordinary mouse. Born to a family of humans, he lives in New York City with his parents, his older brother George, and Snowbell the cat. Though he's shy and thoughtful, he's also a true lover of adventure. From there on he started to life the life he wanted to live, with a family and everything normal with out having the same ugly and danger life that he was living before.

This two books connect in they way that they both had a really dark life time. Furthermore it changes at the end because they have what they wanted, and what they wanted was a better life and a better future for them selves. They fought for what they wanted and they got what they wanted. (if you want to do it, you can do it).

generally it was all about the family sleeping.however one of them is seen everything that is happening while the others are sleeping.for instance,rock and murthur rumbuling aruond outside.furthermore he cant sleep.in contrast he feels scare.consequently he can not sleep anymore.in conclusion he did not sleep.

generally the father and the son they had a good relation between them.however the mom and the other boys didnt knew nothing of what was happening between them.fothermore the father always brake in ice.for instance "How ya doing, Tiger?" he would say. Hearing the old name that Father used when I was a little boy always brought a smile to my face. "I'm OK,".consecuently they didn't know and realize everyone uin the house will know what was going to happend next.in conclusion they find out everything that was going on between the father and the son.

generally humanity will be thought to be part of every human.however there are not good moment were peopple loose thier humanity.furthermore the slaves masters were dehumanized by slabery.for instance slaves were dehumanized by slavery.consecuently slaves masters enjoy their whip to slaves.in contrast slave masters were not dehumanize against their will.in conclusion humanity can be something that can be taken away by something so cruel.