Maria’s Comments (group member since Sep 11, 2009)

Maria’s comments from the Ms. J's Class L group.

task 3
outline
introduction the theme is "accomplishment" is embody in the passage that is "fame" by shirley jackson and "hammers is the fog"by thomas alan orr

it is task 2
outline
1-intro(i am writing to persuade you that indoor pollutants can cause hearlth risks, and to tell you about ways these risks can be reduced)
2-reason #1 why indoor pollutants are risks (with citation from text#1)
3-reason #2 why indoor pollutants are risks (with cituation from text#2)
4-summary of ways indoor pollutants are risky,and how to reduce these risks.

it is task 1
the topic that will be read is Madame Marie Curie
the 4 brainstormed topics that I can related to the reading to the Madame Marie Curie is a successful scientist
listen to an account
writer important name,read non-fiction graph table
persuative letter.

“In a dark time, the eye begins to see...” I greed with this quote because is the moment that you think that everything was loose but is not true because is the moment that you can see what happen. The two books that I take to connect to the quote is Frederick Douglass by Frederick Douglass and Twilight by Stephanie-Meyer-responds-to-breaking-dawn. Frederick Douglass was an American slave because the American people separate the baby with the mother. Frederick Douglass because is the moment that they see what happen
Frederick Douglass was an American slave because the American people separate the baby with the mother .And also when Frederick Douglass was one year the American people separate was her mother and they only see the mother one time .Sophia auld turned out to be all that she had appeared to be at out first meeting a woman of the kindest heart and feeling. Sophia auld is a good woman because she want to help Frederick Douglass how to write and how to red .when her

I think that Frederick Douglas was smart Futhermore he was brave.The Narrative of the life of Frederick Douglas is when some women have a baby the some people serparte the baby with the mother,one exile the women. Howeverthe baby sought seek the mother one time or more.Covey dehumanize Frederick Douglas the4refore he decided to fight back,and regained his humanity.Fredeerick Douglas is a good man.he was nevertheless of covey because covey was an evil man.generally, humanity is the quality or condition of being human.

I find that your theme is very interesting because it is a kind of theme that we have a lot to said about it .

I really like your theme because we can talk a lot about the theme and explain different kind of ideas about it .

The theme of my book is family,because in my poem it talks about how family comes together and how they spend time with the ones they love.

"the setting of my book is Dominican Republic. The setting affect the plot of my book because at that time only the president could publish books, write poetry and most things related to editing."

what is the characters in you book most important?

" The main character in my book is Ana Rosa. Ana Rosa need a notebook because she like to writer. Ana Rosa want to write a poem becuase she like to write a poem in her futere.
Ana Rosa want to realizes the power of her words also she want to tranform the word around her and to transcend the most unthinkable of tragedies".

the major theme in my book is that she want to write but her family say that the only who can write is the president only write because they have the good economic.this theme is very important to the character in this book because she only want to write a poem where she can express the language that she write.

this is the book I'm reading. I choose this book becuase it look interesting. the page that i am on is in the page six. what is happened so far is that the only thing that she like is writing.