Maharouf’s Comments (group member since Sep 30, 2009)

Maharouf’s comments from the Ms. J's Class J group.

this is the task 2
my outline is:
1}the introduction the both text embody to the topic how to protect yourself from the sun and stay healty.
2} the text number1
3} text number 2.
4] conclusion : the sun sun is important for the plant they get energy from it .

this ist he task1. the topic is how and what qualities get scientist succeed. the topics taht i may relate to the reading are the scientist use experiment and lab report to see the difference between things they investigate and learn from it , the scintist do make mistakes in their hypothesis however in the result they learntheir mistakes and how things works .
while reading you should being taking notes about the theme an the lireary elemet fro example : CHARACTERS , SETTING , PLOT, CONFLICTS , METAPHOR,SIMILIE.

this ist he task1. the topic is how and what qualities get scientist succeed. the topics taht i may relate to the reading are the scientist use experiment and lab report to see the difference between things they investigate and learn from it , the scintist do make mistakes in their hypothesis however in the result they learntheir mistakes and how things works .
while reading you should being taking notes about the theme an the lireary elemet fro example : CHARACTERS , SETTING , PLOT, CONFLICTS , METAPHOR,SIMILIE.

According to the quote "In a dark time, the eye begins to see...” I think it trying to say that in harm or dangerous time you fight back or when thing getting worse and worse or it incline you revenge it's like your eyes get open however the author use metaphor by saying dark time which is harm time ,when thing get worse.
Truly it connected to a book that I read independently the book was call Brothers in Arm the book was Buford high publish. And the book we read together in the class which is life of Frederick narrative.

in the book there was some teen in gang and one of their fellow get shoot and all of rest teen in the gang homage their fellow brother for instant by taking revenge, pay back to kill whoever kill their fellow nevertheless the problems was getting worse because of all that crime going on there was a family decide to move from the place they don’t want same thing to happen again this family eyes open and they want to move because the problems were not solving.

Also I suggest the quote connect to the book call life of Frederick narrative they connect because the slavers were dehumanize by their white master which is the dark time they were not allow to learn how to read how write ,they took their humanity away from them . Their masters didn’t see aunt equality between them, they thought the slavers were just their property . Finally the slavers decide that fought back that is when their eyes started to open and now they knew they were dehumanize and they could have their own freedom and nobody should not control them.

In my conclusion

According to the quote "In a dark time, the eye begins to see,...” I think it trying to say that in harm or dangerous time you fight back or when thing getting worse and worse or it incline you revenge it's like your eyes get open however the author use metaphor by saying dark time which is harm time ,when thing get worse.
Truly it connecte to a book i have read independently the book was call Brothers in Arm it as Bluford high publish. in the book there was some teen in gang and one of their fellows get shoot and all of them homage their fellows brother for instant by taking revenge and pay back to kill whoever kill their fellow nevertheless the thing was getting worse because of all that crime there was a family decide to move from the place they dont want same thing to happen again this family eyes open and they want to move because thing was getting better and they thought their son may die to.
Also i suggest the book connect of life of frederick narrative because when they slavers were dehumanize whiCh is the dark time and their eyes started open and that is when they get to take revenge and fought back WITH their white masters.

Najim no violation

generally the slavers were dehumanize by white people their masters .However were courage and still want to learn how to read and write furthermore they still want to have their humanity back for instance they fought back and trying to escape from their masters. therefore frederick escape and went to new york nevertheless he was isolate he miss his fellows slavers , simillary as his other fellow miss him to above all the slavers have confident on each other clearly they care about each other ,and they won't had any discussion with out one fellow missing . truly frderick was worrying taht he will be capture and they will send him back to his masters . learning how to read and write consequentenly let him escape

i never read this book but i think it will be interesting