Monica’s Comments (group member since Sep 11, 2009)

Monica’s comments from the Ms. J's Class J group.

WHICH TASK IS THIS? Task 3

The theme accomplishment is embodied by the follwing texts FAME By Shirley Jackson and Soybeans by Thomas ALAN.

Evidence from text one Fame...Use literary elements.

Evidence from text two Soybeans... Use literary elements.

Conclusion summary..

WHICH TASK IS THIS? Task #2

Introduction: I'm writing to pesuade you about the threat of sun exposure which can be really dangers.

Reason #1 sun exposure can burn your skin like what happe on passega one with the character Erin.

Reason #2

Summary:

This is task # 1
We will lesting to a texts about exploring qualities that make scientists successful.
Topics that can be related to the reading can be: what kind of techniques does a sucessful scientis use , what made Madame Marie Curie famous....
When we takes notes we should write who,when,where,how and why....also importants dates.

“In a dark time, the eye begins to see,...” — Theodore Roethke The Collected Poems of Theodore Roethke, 1966.Humans generally react to certain situations depending on the dangers that they face.For example,In the book the narrative of Federick Douglass the main character of the book Federick was a slave who past through dehumanization.Federick was constatly thinking on a plant to achieve his freedom,but it wasnt untill he was almost lost in the world of slavery that he decide to escape.

Another texts that support this idea is Desiree Baby,by Kati Chopin.In this texts the main character was a young lady name Desiree,she have africans roots.She get married with a white man which after their were married consecuently started to discriminate her because of her race.It took her time to find out that she was african,it wasnt untill he ignored her and reject her that she give up a decide to move away from him.This texts embody the citation because only when Desiree was discriminate by her husband she could see the reality,that by this time white and black werent considere equal.

Generally slaves were treat as animals or machines by their masters.However some slaves were treat better then others depending on their behavior and also the slaves owner humanity.For instance Federick Douglass was a smart slave who always follows the rules untill he was understood that he was being dehumanaze by his maters.Clearly he works for his freedom patiently.In conclusion he accompliesh his goal and serve as an exmaple to others slaves.

Youba wrote: "Hello Monica!
How do you feel about your character when they raped her? Example, could you keep going that school after people making fun of you?
Just question I did not mean it.
Sincerely!
Youba f..."
hey youbaa.. well i feel very upset because she is just a lil girl who doesnt deserve something like that...i think that every where you go there are people who make fun of you..i just dont care about..dont listen to them..keep moving foward to become a better person.

Hi rafael...well she is afraid of Boy..specially the boy who raped her,because they go to the same school. students are making fun of her because she doesnt want to talk she is mute..

What is a major theme in your Regional Poem or short story (that you are reading in English class with your group)? Is it similar to, or different from, a theme in your independent reading book?

The major theme on the short story that im reading is discrimination.This theme is similar to my independent reading( Speak),Which is a book about a girl who was raped,because of the raped she feels unsafe and to proctect herself she decide to stay quitE(mute).nOw her friends and classmates thinks that she is a a wierd person and that needs help or will end doing negative things.This is similar to the short story im reading because the in the story the husband doesnt want want his wife because he discover that her roots are from african people.Now he act like The classmates of the girl ingonering her and think that she is a influence to his social life.

What is the setting of your book? How does the setting (place AND time) of your book affect the plot?
One of the setting of my book its the school.The school complicate the life of my characters because she was raped and now she is afraind of people.And in the school students makes fun of her.

hey Youbaa! I like to read books about love so i can learn from them when i have a realtionship.Aslo becausee i like to read about positive things and real feelings.

What is a major theme in your book? Why is this theme important to the characters in the book?Themajor theme in my book is that the main character wantto become an independet women and get married with the men that she loves.But they have to face many challegens before they can piece on their hearts and find the rigth time for they love.

The main character on my book wants to grow. She is 32 years old and and want to buy a house and ger married.But for that she needs to work to become independet.

Yeah! like u said Ramays and Malcoming love each but they won't admit..untill she is kidnapped and he rescue her.!! Well i never read a book before were the characters didnt admit they love each other..this is the first time that i read a book with that type of situation.But i can compare with twilight saga..Where the mean characters of the book Bella and Edwar love each other and he was there to rescue her from the danger

Yeah! like u said Ramays and Malcoming love each but they won't admit..untill she is kidnapped and he rescue her.!! Well i never read a book before were the characters didnt admit they love each other..this is the first time that i read a book with that type of situation.But i can compare with twilight saga..Where the mean characters of the book Bella and Edwar love each other and he was there to rescue her from the danger.

The book im reading is lOve Runs Deep. I choose this because i read the summary and it sound interesting to me because i like to read love stories.I already finish reading the book.The mean characters of the book are Ramays and Malcoming.He is a police officer. And She is 3 grade teacher.They were friends since middle.They fall in love but none of them have the courage to show interest from one to another.Now Ramays is 32 years old and still love him.She was kidnapped and he has the power to safe her.After he rescued her.Malcoming ask Ramays if she wants to marry him.She accepted! and you can imagen the rest..happy end