Zainab’s Comments (group member since Mar 24, 2021)

Zainab’s comments from the Read my writing...please? group.

Hey guys, I'm new and I am trying to write my first novel, I used to do a lot of descriptions but do wish to do a real story. here is the link to mine, please give me feedback and tell me if there's anything I can fix.
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...