Musical♥Writer’s Comments (group member since Jul 22, 2009)

Musical♥Writer’s comments from the Read my writing...please? group.

I just invited 36 people

oky!

That was fun to write!

I thought so, because of the chorus like part:
Happiness
Seems so
Far away now
The pain of the world

Please read and comment!! I'm not sure where to go with idk (or of a title) or My Love! And Wings of Forever and Red Fangs I'm writing more of right now. Pleaseee!

Wow!

Pretty much all my writing falls under this catagory! They fall under romance and adventure too, but mostly fantasy!
Wings of Forever
My Love
Red Fangs
idk...

okay!

I like your Adventure one! I can't decide where to post my other poems, or writing, *sigh* I'm no good at decisions

Your really good!!!

I think this would be drama...
Pom Pom's See it All

Hi!

thanks! here's another:

It is

It is everywhere I look
It is nowhere in sight
It is my spirit
It is my hatred
It is my tears
It is my voice
It is my fears
It is a loving embrace
It is a kick to the curb
It is a truth
It is a fairy tale
It is all there is
It is nothing at all
It is my life
It is my end
It is inside me
It is out of my reach
It is all i want
It is my worst fear
It is strenghthening
It is maddening
It is my closest friend
It is a stranger
It is the world
It is the fires of hell
It is essential
It is toxic
It is...Love

All my poetry I just posted off the top of my head when I had insperation, *shrugs* some aren't the best...

I don't know where to post my writing! I can't tell if it goes in Romance, or Drama, or Adventure! Did you have a fantasy...I don't think so...help?!

Forbidden Love

I talk to you
Most everyday
We are so close
Yet so far away

A secret love
We cannot tell
For if we do
All wont be well

All the time
We pretend
We glare and fight
We cannot bend

But darling
I can't live this way
Sneaking, hiding
Day after day

I want you for life
But this secrecy hurts
Noone knows your mine
So those cheerleaders flirt

Why can't we tell
Let them all know
If we don't
I swear I will go

But I can't
I'm stuck on you
At least tell them
Your stuck on someone too

Dont tell them its me
Just say you've got a girl
Then that flirting
Will unfurl

I need to be sure
I'm set above
So that its safe
Our Forbidden Love

Does that count as romance?