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"I see" Citrine said, remembering being warned of corrupted Gems
"How far have the humans progressed since the rebellion?" he asked, remembering the near savage creatures that he had based his form upon.

Is the idea good, i kind of want to write a book now but every book i've ever written was garbage, mostly trashy fanfiction, incomplete ideas, and an ill researched philosophical thesis. mostly fanfiction though.
I know what i want this idea to turn into, but i don't know how to make it into the vision that i have in my head. It's like when you know what you want to say, but don't have a word for it. It's just so frustrating.
Please read this and tell me what you think.

"There is something to protect it from?" he said wondering what could possibly mean enough of a threat to permanently station a Gem here.

((Sorry Red Diamond was an OC i had before i actually started watching so sometimes i get Pink and Red mixed up))
He didn't know what to say, he had never talked to a sapphire before, he didn't know what would be appropriate to talk about, with the Rubies back on homeworld he would talk about combat strategy, but he had no idea about the things a sapphire likes to talk about, his mind was drawn to the atmosphere. "So, the atmosphere, it feels so, um, lively" he said awkwardly

((I hate when i drop my phone and it posts prematurely))
The term 'Crystal Gems' sounded familiar, probably something he heard around Homeworld.

Citrine thought for a moment "I was under Red Diamond, as were all Gems born on this colony, but when she was shattered, i was transfered into the service of Yellow Diamond." he explained. "Which is your Diamond?" he asked

Citrine stood and pulled his sword from the dirt "Apologies." he said as he put the sword away.
He looked at her and raised his brow again "I was not informed that there would be other Gems on this planet," he said, rather to himself than to Star "but perhaps my Diamond became impatient with my progress and sent others in my place"

Citrine's eyes widened as she spoke. He trust his sword into the ground and dropped to one knee "My apologies, I had no idea that I was in the presence of a Sapphire." he said.

"I'm afraid that departure would be impossible." Citrine explained "i was only given enough energy for one way transport. As for 'threatening' this planet, I have not been briefed on the purpose of this colony, i am to be briefed by Jasper once I have located her."

"I'm afraid that departure would be impossible." Citrine explained "i was only given enough energy for one way transport. As for 'threatening' this planet, I have not been briefed on the purpose of this colony, i am to be briefed by Jasper once I have located her."

Citrine lifted his brow in confusion "Yes" he answered, he would have thought it obvious, but maybe it wasn't.

Upon seeing the Gem approach, Citrine lowered his sword and replied "I am Citrine, I was sent here to locate and assist the Jasper that has been assigned to this planet."

((Sorry, life is so crazy with the start of summer and every time i pick up my phone i need to do something else))
As the sound got closer Citrine said, quite loudly "identify yourself." He slowly pulled his sword from his gem, better to be prepared than shattered.

((Sorry i've been gone so long, my cousin borrowed my phone and forgot that it was in his pocket, i just got my phone back))
Citrine's ship landed in a forest not very far from the Temple of the Crystal Gems.
He stepped off of the descending ramp. the air felt alive with tiny organisms.
His comms were less than satisfactory and his ship was a piece of garbage, but at least he knew how to operate it. Unlike the new ships being introduced every few cycles, this ship had been through a war and a half, it was reliable
Walked a few paces and heard a commotion heading in his direction. He stopped, and watched the bushes from the direction the sound came from as it got closer.

Citrine neared Earth's atmosphere in his small, single pilot ship. "Mission Log entry 4097: I am nearing the target planet. Earth, it seems, is covered with large cities and massive structures, it seems that the life forms of Earth have evolved beyond our expectations. They still pose no threat.
End Log."

After a long time of traveling, an ancient Homeworld ship nears earth.

Good idea

Sure

I was going to say that he just hasn't been a Crystal Gem for very long, but it just occured to me that we could RP his arrival.
Considering that he prefers Old war tech it would make sense that he would use a slow ship with near useless comms, so he would have no idea what was happening on Earth and Homeworld, meaning that the only knowledge he has of the subject is that Jasper and Peridot failed

Yeah i was just using that as an example, each RP can have any number of characters in it, if we did that we would label it like "Spinal, Star Sapphire, and Citrine RP"