David’s Comments (group member since Mar 25, 2017)

David’s comments from the What is Life without Books group.

This is my first release in almost a year. I wrote it during the time when my grandpa died and I graduated high school. A lot of my thoughts and searching went into the book process. In the end, I have this 20,000 word novella for you. Kindle edition is only 99 cents; paperback is under 5 dollars. It’s a quick, entrancing, thoughtful read that’ll stick with you after.



The wilderness shows no mercy.

In this dystopian journey, survival is key. Behind them, certain death. Ahead, a mystery called Home. The trail isn’t what it seems. And Lucy is sick.

Some say nobody comes back from Home. And others say they can’t

https://www.amazon.com/dp/1082096741

Until We Burn



Horror, Psychological Thriller, Suspense... (No Gore)

Cyrus Street never forgot about his home. It was always in the back of his mind, with the memories, the nightmares. Alluring, always pulling him back. There were so many questions unanswered. Something he left behind.

When he finally returns, he's drawn back into a world even worse than he remembers. Werifesteria, with its dark secrets and murky past, never changed. It remains a cesspool, a danger. There's something about the town unnerving, yet enticing. It isn't normal. It isn't sane.

As soon as Cyrus steps back into it, the murders begin. He's the only one can catch this madman, if he can only control his mind.

Everybody remembers the fire. Everybody remembers him. But there's a darkness he's buried inside his own head. And unless he can remember, the entire town will burn.

I would say if the review is a 2 or 3 star, try to point out some positive aspects of the book to go along with the criticisms.

The Retreat by Mark Edwards

I suggest Lauren Algeo's book Power

That's very interesting. I'd thought about that. Alternative endings kind of do the same thing, just a bit different.

Thank you Aly! Lol. Just making this thread friendly for those to come in.

I write Horror, and my books are on sale constantly. I'll try to post back here when they are next time. They're always 99 cents, and it's always worth the price (I hope. If the book isn't worth 99 cents, then it has to be terrible )

Also, I haven't written a book with kittens. So I apologize to everybody.

I like anything scary and lots of Fantasy. Favorite book... I'll list a few. Harry Potter, LOTR, Narnia, Inheritance. Yeah.

My name is David Kummer, I'm a teenager and published author. I like reading (obviously) but also enjoy basketball, food, money, and all the teenage things that people do. I don't listen to rap though. If you were wondering.

I'm one of Aly's bestest friends (in my mind) and am very excited for this group! I like seeing new groups. It's like seeing a new baby. In the hospital. Except the group talks to you, and has lots of different voices. Alright, I'm done.