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Moody’s comments from the Sequel Addicted group.

lol. you post it here carly!!!!

hope you wont drop this group then aN!!

lol!!! haha

Dam!!!!!!!!!!!

ok lol. thanks rocio!! i hope you don't hate me...

anyway, I gtg. My sister needs her sleep too.lol

lol aN!!

you can always keep up. :)

rocio! yeah i saw it. I'll delete it. please don't get mad???

ur still on.lol

It must be posted here. :b the entries must be here because we'll get all confused when we post contest entries as title that's why the title of this topic is Week 1: July 16-24.

I hope you don't mind?

Okay, this is an example for the contest. This isn't considered an official entry because I can't join it myself.lol I'm a judge.

But please rate and comment it and tell me if it's okay to be posted in BREATHE CAFE.

lol hope you enjoy it.

Title: Foolish Heart
Author: SiNgUrL
Number of Words: 625
Date Written: July 17,2009


I locked my room. The room was dark because the lights were out.

“We can’t do this anymore. I can’t love you because I love her,” Stefan said before he left me in the park today.

Before I could say anything, he turned away without any reaction in his face. Nothing at all. I was nothing to him because he loved Jane, my best friend.

I kept myself in the corner where I can see my silhouette in the mirror. My tears were streaming down my face continuously as I stared at my reflection in the mirror without blinking. I tried to stop my breathing because when I breathed, it was painful. I could feel the pain.

I could feel a scar drawn in my heart and I could see the pain in my reflection- the pain that no one could define. The pain searing inside me that all I could think of was why?

I love him and he hurt me always. I always knew he didn’t love me but I held on to him hoping that he would eventually love me back even if that hope was vague. I knew he loved her, my best friend but I couldn’t give him away without having the chance of making him feel that I love him. Every day I did my best to suppress the overflowing love I had for him while still showing him how much I care. I tried not to lose myself but here I was hurting and all alone. It was too late.

My world revolved around him, I couldn’t deny that. Everything reminded me of him and with every breath I made I could see his face, the way we touched and the way I believed he could love me back. I was foolish.

He broke my heart into pieces leaving a very deep wound here in my heart and I could feel it – the hole that cannot be patched. I thought I could make him love me. I thought he’d learn to care. But no he didn’t leaving my fragility bare.

No one caught me. No one understood. Everybody left me because I was the foolish one to have believed the vague hope I had.

I gave him three chances… No! I gave myself three chances to prove that I could love him the way Jane couldn’t and it just left me deeper pain searing through my heart.

And here I am crying. My reflection is showing me how I must hate him but I couldn’t because it wasn’t his fault. It was mine. It wasn’t Jane’s fault too. I couldn’t blame anyone but myself. I was ignorant, innocent and selfish.

I felt something beside me. It felt like a book and I decided to throw it in the mirror leaving shards of sharp glasses everywhere and I held one. The light outside was reflecting itself unto it and I smiled.

This is the end of everything. The unceasing pain that I felt for a whole year and that I knew I would be feeling for the rest of my life – my useless life without Stefan. I held the sharp piece of mirror in my hand and pressed it against my wrist. One slash… only one slash and I’d be free and happier without this wound and pain – the suffering.

I did it! I could feel warm blood flowing in my bare skin. I feel dizzy but I was happy. The physical pain was covering the emotional one and that made me smile. It was over. Everything was over. Nothing could hurt me anymore.

Death is the sweetest revenge and the greatest relief that I could think of to save me from suffering the pain of my broken heart.

Chynna ran to her room and spent the rest of the afternoon there. Nobody was home except her and her younger brother Luis.

Later, she recieved a call from Vannie but she ignored it.

Before six in the afternoon, her brother called her.

"Chynna someone's looking for you!" Luis shouted.

"If it's Vannie, tell her I'm not in the mood to talk!" she yelled back.

"No, it's your boyfriend!" he yelled again.

Boyfriend? What boufriend. It couldn't be Damien, could it? She ran to her mirror and brushed her hair and looked at herself and ran downstairs.

Damien was there on the couch watching Luis play video game.

He looked up and smiled at her surprisingly making her heart melt and feel warm.

This week's topic is: Mirror

Rules:

1. The short story should be from 500-1500 words. The poems are 3 stanzas up.

2. Topics will be posted every Friday and the winners will be announced here and posted in Bretahe Cafe in the weekends.

3. The following shall be posted according below.

Title:
Author:
Number of Words:
Date Written:

Good luck!

of twilight?

will you put only one topic for all the books?

lol tnx

Who was your first guess the half-blood Prince was? I thought it was Voldemort's old book.lol

Did you make the right guesses?

I so looooved this book! I can't wait to watch the movie and compare it with the book.

The death of Cedric Diggory was devastating.

Harry could've let the vines just take Cedric away, he could've lived (according to the movie). But anyway that's part of the story which proves Harry wasn't selfish like Voldemort.

Ron started getting jealous here and it was a bit funny.

What did you think about book 4? How will you rate it from 1-5?

Who likes to be a parselmouth like Harry and Voldemort?

Which part of the book made you excited to read more?

DO you prefer the movie or the book?

lol

hey Carly we're making the topics for sequels

lol thanks carly!

((so what happens next?lol))

yeah