Valentina’s Comments (group member since Jun 05, 2017)

Valentina’s comments from the Navigating Indieworld Discussing All Things Indie group.

Hi, if anyone is interested, I have a short story (about 8k)

"You’re not going to die. It’ll pass in a few minutes. Two more blocks. Breathe, just breath. Focus. Don’t lose focus. Keep going."

19-year-old Alicia feels trapped by her own mind. Everyday is a challenge, every thought is a torture. Until she meets an unusual new friend.

Brown Eyes is short story about overcoming fears, never giving up and realizing things do get better.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/...

If you're still interested, I have a short story.

"You’re not going to die. It’ll pass in a few minutes. Two more blocks. Breathe, just breath. Focus. Don’t lose focus. Keep going."

19-year-old Alicia feels trapped by her own mind. Everyday is a challenge, every thought is a torture. Until she meets an unusual new friend.

Brown Eyes is short story about overcoming fears, never giving up and realizing things do get better.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/...

I want to get some reviews/opinions of my short story. It's available for free on Inkitt.

"You’re not going to die. It’ll pass in a few minutes. Two more blocks. Breathe, just breath. Focus. Don’t lose focus. Keep going."

19-year-old Alicia feels trapped by her own mind. Everyday is a challenge, every thought is a torture. Until she meets an unusual new friend.

Brown Eyes is short story about overcoming fears, never giving up and realizing things do get better.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/...