Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten) Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten)’s Comments (group member since Jun 14, 2009)



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only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 05:33AM

20123 Haha, of course i read my feed back.... not 2 mention people like u and Bec who tell me every time the subject of my story comes up they want them to be together.
*sigh* i can't really tell u where i wanna go, cos it'll ruin future chapters... but what if in the end, the VERY, VERY end things went bad 4 them??....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 05:27AM

20123 See what if they didn't get 2 b 2gether Soph.... that's wat i mean....
Damn, i'm guessing that wud upset people
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 05:20AM

20123 ^^^^Just an idea Soph.... one of many btw lol
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 05:20AM

20123 Well, i'm not 100% positive about them.... i hav few idea's and i'm gonna throw that in somehow.

Oh now... Soph. Just hear me out for a minute. Now everyone is so set on Roxi and Logan having a happy ending, but wat if they didn't?? Don't get me wrong, they'll still hav moments but what if my ending wasn't so happy but was kind of the set up of the next story we were talking about???
Wud that bother u so much?? Do u really think people wud b upset??
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 05:11AM

20123 Um, a bit... somewhere between 5 and 10 chapters, i've still got a bit 2 go lol
And i STILL don't hav my ending.

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 05:05AM

20123 Oh..... hon, i sooooo i can't answer ANY of ur questions without giving anything away.
Remember the Manor was just one bunch of vampire's (good vampires)
There r others, some that r good and some... not so much


only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 04:54AM

20123 Hmm, i was gonna hav a similar storyline i guess.
She was gonna fall for a vamp.... I guess i just changed the related character, cos the vamp she was gonna fall 4 in the greg's daughter story was just gonna b sum random vamp
See this story is gonna b set after my 1st 1 ends and the characters r sorta dealing with the fallout of the ending of the 1st book (if that makes sense)

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 04:43AM

20123 Yes, she falls for him lol and she gets drawn into the world she fought 2 escape
Yep, cos when Claudia became a vamp she walked away from her family and my idea is that one of her sibling's had kid and one day he becomes a vampire like she was.. and well u know how i want the story 2 go.
This i thought about b4 so i've got more of an idea then the 1 with greg's daughter but idk...

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 04:32AM

20123 Oh yeah sure lol
This one i'm still trying 2 straighten out my idea.
It's still a hunter/vampire thing (idk i like that lol) and it's about this girl whose family r all hunters and she runs away cos it isn't the life she wants until she meets a vampire who is Claudia's nephew
Wat do u think??

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 04:22AM

20123 Right, my fault haha
Hmmm maybe, i hav a few idea's.... that 1 and another main 1, but so far the 1 with gregs daughter is winning out against the other
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 04:12AM

20123 Oh srry.... this is years later, after everything. lol
I thought of that, maybe i will.... or at least mention them in conversations, sorta say how there lives ended up sort of thing
OMG! everyone is sooo worried abt Logan and Roxi.... damn

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 04:04AM

20123 Yep, yep, hunters.... i was thinking Greg.... or his daughter ;}
Damn! i can't really tell u n e thing or ask u ur opinion cos it'll spoil the end of the story that i'm writing now.....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 03:52AM

20123 Oh Ditto, ditto
Sum-times at night i hav these massive ideas or thoughts and i scramble 2 write them b4 i 4get lol
Most of the time when i'm writing i'll read it out 2 myself as i go. Do u do that?? Or is it just me??

Oh hey, i've been thinking about writing sum sort of sequel wen i'm finished. It wudn't involve Roxi and Logan but some of the other characters. I actually sorta hav a plot, but i'm not sure
Wat do u think??
I know, i haven't even finished the story i'm writing and i'm thinking about after.....haha

Sep 07, 2009 03:48AM

20123 I just finished Need by Carrie Jones and Wings by Aprilynne Pike- both really good books and both worth reading :}
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 03:39AM

20123 Lol, that's like me.... sorta. I write my story in an A4 exercise book that i can take everywhere (mainly skool) and then i type it on word, edit things and then post it on here.
I think it depends on how similar u make it 2 VA. If u can find a way 2 change the situations a bit and the characters aren't the same, i don't c why u shud hav problems.... besides the whole sum one falling 4 their teacher/instructor situation isn't just in VA so i wudn't say u copied it
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 03:29AM

20123 :}
Haha, i just finished reading ur last chapter... I love what u've written so far and i want u 2 add more, soph
idk... just add it how u think u shud... it'll b easier once u start

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 03:19AM

20123 Yessss crazy readers *cough* Sophie *cough* and others....
Nah, i've tried, and lately i just can't get it...
I don't wanna force myself cos it'll either turn out horrible and then i won't wanna finish the story :(
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 03:11AM

20123 Cool, well at least that was something different

Oh, haha. I know, i know. Honestly i do. I just haven't been able 2 write lately. My mind's been coming up blank every time i try.....srry
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 03:02AM

20123 Good...wbu???
How's school been??
Mine's been same old, same old.....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 07, 2009 02:51AM

20123 I'm on :D