Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten) Rachel (The Rest Is Still Unwritten)’s Comments (group member since Jun 14, 2009)



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only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 01:34AM

20123 Slack Sophie, really slack! write faster pls
That's ok, i gotta go 2....
chat soon :}
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 01:30AM

20123 Sophie wrote: "yeah.. tell me wen and where u add it coz u havent said that she has fangs..
wat do u predict my story will be abt? lol"


I'll tell u.... honestly idk... u haven't given much away yet, which is good. I'm looking 4ward 2 reading and finding out.... OR u can tell me now :}

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 01:12AM

20123 Sophie wrote: "dus she hav fangs? i didnt noe that
u havent relli expalained much abt her vampireness.. she is a bit more normal than vampire tho"


She does hav fangs, but i haven't mentioned them, yet... hav i?? there's a bit coming up, where it shows... and i explained why it's not very obvious. do u think i shud hav mentioned something abt them earlier?? i think maybe i shud hav....damn, :(
I'm gonna go over the story completly wen i'm finished and i may hav 2 add that in sumwhere
i wanted her 2 b more normal, but i still wanted her 2 b essentially a vampire...
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 01:02AM

20123 Sophie wrote: "myn is kinda similar to a few things, but im adding my spin to it too..
the supernatural will be touched on next chapter and explained the chapter after that"


:D i'm looking 4ward to reading those chapters and i can't wait until the male lead come's in. U better make him hot lmao....
Hey i hav a question: in my story, wat do u think of Roxi?? is she vampire enough?? (if that makes sense?? lol) i mean i've had her drinking blood, but i haven't made her bare her fangs or n e thing like that. Doe she seem too normal???
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 12:49AM

20123 :} i like wat ur're doing with it so far, i'm still waiting 4 the supernatural bits 2 REALLY kick in, but i know it will soon.
I didn't really copy n e thing with my story. Did i??? i mean i took the idea of vampire's that had souls and put my spin on it. It's similar 2 VA in that sense i guess. And vampire hunters hav been around 4 a while.....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 12:31AM

20123 Yeah i know how that is.... with my story, i thought of the chapter where the covenant first meets the hunters and the chapter where the manor burnt down. Those were my 1st ideas, then i was like ok, nice idea, now how can i make a story out of that..... and well, u know wat i've written so far.....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 12:24AM

20123 (:Hayley Loves......Justin Bieber!!!:D wrote: " o and just really quick i addded more to my short stories ok bye bye haha"

i'm gonna read it :]
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 12:22AM

20123 Sophie wrote: "WOOOOHOOOO!! yippee!! lol

same with me, i hav major stuff to happen and i noe wats gonna happen in the future.. but i dnt noe where im gonna take the story..? and i hav to think of wat to put i..."


Haha...gee don't get 2 excited lol

:} It's annoying isn't it??? cos u know wats GONNA happen, it's the lead up to the big things that is hard 2 write
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 12:13AM

20123 Sophie wrote: "yep, looks like it :D
wen r u gonna add more to ure story?"


Soon, i've written abt a page, but i'm finding it difficult 2 write. I hav a few chapters actually written, or part written, but it's writing the bits b4 and in the lead up 2 those chapters that i'm having problems with.
And i still haven't decided my ending.... although u'll b happy 2 hear that i think i'll hav a happy ending. I just don't know how it will b and i don't want it 2 b 2 cheesy haha
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 27, 2009 12:02AM

20123 Ok, bye Hayley
So Soph, looks like it's just u and me....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:57PM

20123 (:Hayley Loves......Justin Bieber!!!:D wrote: "hey sorry guys but aprils computer shut off on her but she texted me and told me to tell everybody bye and shell be on again maybe tomroow!!
i can stay though haha"


That's cool, i friend requested her lol
So wat u been up 2 Hayley?? Done n e thing interesting lately???
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:52PM

20123 Sophie wrote: "nope, not the main guy.. the main guy is yet to be introduced :D
but he will be a frend"


Oh ok cool.....i'm gonna guess.... is he the 1 watching her??? he is isn't he??? haha.... i like this Soph, the tables have turned lol
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:44PM

20123 Sophie wrote: "(:Hayley Loves......Justin Bieber!!!:D wrote: "actually yeah shes even weirder than u guys haha:pp"

wow, that must be pretty wierd then.. we r looking forward to seeing that April :)

and yes ..."


Yeah, April.... show us ur worst haha

Yay!! Is he gonna b like the main guy??? like how Logan is mine???

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:39PM

20123 Sophie wrote: "we r being honest and yes, we r telling her wat to expect
uhm.. rach i will add to my story maybe tomoro..
i am introducing the supernatural stuff.. so it shud get more interesting, i hope :D"


Haha.....
Cool, i'm looking forward to seeing wat happens. Oh, just 1 question: Is Adien gonna hav a big part?? Cos i liked him, he seemed cool

Lol, oh April, don't worry abt being weird.... we'll give u a run 4 ur money :P
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:32PM

20123 (:Hayley Loves......Justin Bieber!!!:D wrote: "geez nice way to make a new impresion guys jkjk lol:))"

Lol :P
Yes, well we're just being honest and pointing out wat she should expect.....:D

only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:29PM

20123 Aprilloves....hayley!!:)))) wrote: "haha thanks,Rachel right?:)))
"


I'm Rachel :)
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:27PM

20123 Sophie wrote: "apologise? of please, rach, we arent that bad..
except for if u hav a good story we kinda hound u and threaten to kill u... but thats it.. lol :D"


Not bad???.... ur kidding me right.... jk, jk.... sorta, maybe... not really lol
Lol, thanks. i'll keep that in mind Sophie. Wen r u gonna add 2 ur story n e way?? i'm waiting....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:22PM

20123 (:Hayley Loves......Justin Bieber!!!:D wrote: "hey Rach and Soph!:))Thats april my bff finally got her to sign up lol
what cha doing o and she had to get off:(("


Oh lol.... i wondered cos she sounded like u, and u were in her profile pic. And the name was similar.... geez i'm getting a headache lmao
Hello, April, welcome to our little group, chat thingy.... i apologize in advance haha
:D
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:16PM

20123 Aprilloves....hayley!!:)))) wrote: "hola pp!!:))))
whats up??"


Um, hi....
is that u Hayley?? with a new account. Or r u a friend of Hayley's???
Lol, i'm confused....
only two!!! (7212 new)
Sep 26, 2009 11:09PM

20123 Sophie wrote: "i like trig too, its easy :D
i hate coffee too.. dispise it.. but i meant we went to a coffee shop and she got doffee and i got an iced chocolate, yumm!"


:D
Haha.... that's so me. When me and my friend Mia go to Gloria Jeans i'd always get iced chocolate-they make the nicest one's, especially with caramel drizzled on the top of the cream. So good!