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from the Opening Line Of One Of Your Books! group.
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I hear some James Baldwin in this. That's a good opening, It grabs your attention.

I like that. I almost expected them to start singing too.

The magnificent blue topaz and rose garnet palace floats unmoving and unaided in the aither of the realm of the outer heavens as the beauteous Queen Paranorma of the Kingdom of Azazaeland stood with her back to her attendances.

“Hellions to the right, Hellions to the left. Hellions to the east, Hellions to the west, above, and below. The pits of hell must be empty by now for they're all here around me.” 24 year old Ana BuFaye Wyett thinks while gazing at the streets one level below her window as the early morning heat waves dance before her eyes.