Kaitlyn’s Comments (group member since Jun 13, 2016)

Kaitlyn’s comments from the Beta Reading and Editing group.

I'm not sure if it's just my device, but your email didn't show up.
-Kaitlyn

Can I email it to you? Thank you so much!

Sorry, I totally forgot to introduce myself. Hi, my name is Kaitlyn. ;) ^

I would like an (unpaied) beta reader to please review the first two chapters of my book. It's a start and it moves kind of quickly. There are 2,362 words including the introduction and it's a dystopian literature. I'm hoping that I can get some feedback on how I can improve and how I should approach the next few chapters. This is also the first book I've tried to write. Should I make it a short story, or so you think it would be best to make it longer? It it interesting or boring? Thank you. :)