T.L.’s Comments (group member since May 17, 2016)

T.L.’s comments from the Name That New Book! group.

wow - that's the one title idea I hadn't thought of! I kind of like it, it could be a cute twist, but I don't think wolves eat blueberries ... of course they could in a cute picture book. Since no one gave any feedback till today, I already went with "The Guthrie Family Adventures" for series name and "An Oh, So Curious Boy!" for the first story. It's available for Pre Order = 0.99 to buy and FREE for Kindle Unlimited subscribers.
https://www.amazon.com/Guthrie-Family...

Hi Readers and Authors:

To get things started, here is our first post:

Please help me name my new short story. ...

The story is a prequel introduction to "Peter and the Band of Pirates," Book 1 of "A Band of Pirates Expedition & The Neverland Quest" series ... to introduce readers to the series and main characters.

I need a title that will attract TWEENS and TEENS/YA READERS (for example: Harry Potter Readers)

The series is adventure/fantasy about a boy and his family that go treasure hunting, discover magic and eventually Neverland.

This short story serves to introduce readers to the series and main characters ... the series is adventure/fantasy, and this short story tells a few day adventures of a boy at home.

The adventures in this story are:
1. building a tent in the garden
2. solving the case of the missing blueberry pie
3. encountering a pack of wolves in the woods

all three taking place at or near his home at Guthrie Manor

So, please help me NAME MY NEW SHORT STORY...
Possible titles include:

The Adventures of William Peter Guthrie
Peter and the Mystery of the Missing Blueberry Pie
Peter and the Wolf Pack
Peter in the Woods
Peter's Adventure in the Woods
Peter and the Pack of Wolves
Peter's Adventure at Guthrie Manor
Peter's Adventure's at Home
Peter In His Own Front Yard
Peter's Adventures In the Garden and the Woods
The Guthries' Adventures at Home
The Guthries' Adventures at Guthrie Manor
The Adventures of an Oh, So Curious Boy
The Adventures of an Oh, So Curious Boy and his Sister and Cousin
The Adventures of an Oh, So Curious Boy and his Dog

Tell me which one you like BEST, or give me your suggestion!
All positive replies welcomed

thank you for any help!

Thanks,
TL Jones