Mr. Flame’s Comments (group member since Jul 30, 2016)

Mr. Flame’s comments from the The Song of Creation (fantasy RP) group.

"I agree with the other Predator. So we're heading out tonight?" Kyoshi sat down, twiddling with his ears.

^

Mr. Rock wrote: "Ursa's ears flicked toward Kyoshi. "I saw them some time ago, so perhaps they are moving in this direction? Maybe they're heading back in to capture more Ejiki?" she thought aloud."

"I don't know. I don't know where I was at the time. I thought nothing of it, to be honest. I thought they were just going to be eaten."

Someone play Last Of Us with me please, thanks.

Pffffft.

Kyoshi decided to ignore the Kitsune in the group, and turned his attention to Ursa, and the Dragon boy. "Yeah, same, I saw something like that recently, too."

☤ RiN ☤ wrote: "((Oh whoops sorry :) ))
Chidori covered her mouth with her hand to stifle a laugh "That was one gracefull desent" she laughed before peering down from the tree at the creature and tilted her head a..."

"Yeah, thanks. That's the impression I was looking for, ya know?" Kyoshi stood up, and scooted back at him as the Kitsune examined him thoroughly. "Are my looks not good enough for you, or are you just curious about me?" He joked.

((Will post again in about half an hour or so, when I get home.))

((Gtg now guys. Sorry. He's a Predator by the way, he enjoys Kitsunes due to his past.))

Kyoshi jumped back as he noticed nearly everyone knew where he was, it wasn't very hard to catch another's scent. "Oh crap," he muttered, falling out of the tree, slamming to the ground with a thud.

Kyoshi relaxed up in a nearby tree for several minutes now, arms placed behind his head as some kind of cushion. He stared up above at the foliage, watching as nature worked wonders. He could stay here for hours, and watch has how the bugs gracefully fluttered from leaf to leaf as if their lives were unending. This was until he noticed a party of three. It seemed to be accompanied by a Kitsune, Dragon(?), and Predator. He had felt slightly comfortable that a Kitsune was their. But the large frame of the predator unnerved him, causing him to rustle in the leaves.

((Mind if I join here?))

Thank you!

Stephen wrote: "Approved, and is that cloud?"

The Face claim, yes.

Anyone? I have Kyoshi from Hinasho, and Kenshi from Dasmaynia.

"I think I'll leave now."


Name: Kenshi Geretsuna

Relative Age: 25

Gender: Male

Race: Edolas

Home World: Dasmaynia

Order: None

Appearance:


Kenshi is a man with light skin and is of average height with a lean and toned build. He has spiky blond hair that features one particularly long spike. Kenshi has solid blue eyes, which glow due to him having being exposed to a magical radiance. Kenshi's clothing design was made with fighting in mind, and the concept began with a black robe and was completed into the final version that is now, designed by one of his closest friends. He wears a high collar sleeveless black shirt, black pants and boots, and black cloth covering his left leg and arm.

Personality: Kenshi is an arrogant and proud swordsman, and usually introduces himself as a member of an elite warrior unit from his homeworld. Though, now he remains mainly quiet about a lot of things, and usually replies with a simple comment, or soft smile, not worrying much about anything. Kenshi also loves to be alone and drown in his own imagination, his past friendships being his only safe haven. Though while very incredibly forgiving of others, he tries to remain as least childish as he can possibly be. This means, he refuses to drink alcohol, smoke, or have too much fun in general. And last of all, he is incredibly strategic, never willing to run into a fight head on without a plan, unless he absolutely needs to.



"Please make it in time."

History: Kenshi grew up in a standard family, with his mother passing away during his birth. He had received a standard education, and he had always striven to combat in the military. Being his father is a retired soldier, his father always trained him in these arts, causing him to grow in deep bonds with his father. But Kenshi was different than other children of his age; his father was much more into elderly than the others (Late 50's), and he had no mother, so he never truly understood the love between a mother and her child. He had heard that it was similar to the love of a father and child, but not nearly as strong. So, he trained constantly before and after school with his father, helping him to the fullest to attain his dreams. Waking up at around 4 A.M. every grueling morning to run a few miles to school- part of his training, he'd arrive there at about 4:45, take a shower in the locker rooms, and get changed. He'd usually eat breakfast before he left, and when he got there. Every morning was like this for three years of high school. Once Kenshi had hit sixteen, he'd applied for the military, lying about his age of course. Tackling his attendance at the base and taking on school seemed to be quite the challenge for him. His grades dropped, and his father- having full knowing consent of his lying age- nearly forced him to quit out. Kenshi soon negotiated, and thought his whole life plan over again.... He'd quit the military, schooling, and everything. He left his entire region without a single trace. He had felt extremely sorry for his father, especially, leaving him all alone, no one to take care of him. But, this lifestyle, the way that they lived wasn't Kenshi's way of life. He wanted something more, different. He loved being alone, it was who he was on the inside. So, he abandoned everything. He now lives on his own, mastering swordsman like abilities he never even knew he had. But he did remember something that his father once said, "That our race is born with the unique abilities of sword control. We use it like the extension of our bodies. Remember this, it may save your life one day." Anyways, Kenshi now lives on his own, wandering the world of Dasmaiynia.

Powers:
Amazing Swordsmanship
Healing related spells.

Strengths: Kenshi has an incredible amount of strength, allowing him to carry the gigantic weapons that he does. It also allows for a great fighting build. As he has had incredible training in fighting, too.

Weaknesses: Kenshi's greatest weakness is that he is quite a distant fellow. And though his race is born with a natural talent for healing magic, he never really uses it.

Likes:
Imagining things
Being on his own

Dislikes:
People willing to disrupt him or try to change him
Arrogance

Relationship Status: Open

Other:

Hasn't that been you as well, Rock? <_<

Do dragons need to be requested?

Kyoshi's done.

"She'd always had been one step ahead of me..."

Name: Kyoshi Isamu

Relative Age: 23

Gender: Male

Race: Predator

Home World: Hinansho
Order: Wolf Pack

Appearance:


▪[Eye Color:]▪ A neon blue
▪[Hair Color, Style:]▪ Black, Somewhat long
▪[Complexion:]▪ Scarred, and tanned.
▪[Posture:]▪ Relaxed, with a well balance.

Personality: Even when his life was in danger, Kyoshi refuses to back down. He has achieved victories greater than his abilities would suggest. Kyoshi is driven by a fierce, persistent determination to win, and his guts in battle have proven to work in his favor. However, his volatile emotions could often drive him to behave childishly, and became tiresome to his friends at times. Kyoshi himself could not control his tumultuous soul. Even if seriously wounded, he would completely forget about his pain the moment someone he was trying to protect was in danger. Because of this, his emotions often pushed his body past its limits. This was especially true when his comrades were involved. Kyoshi is not very hotheaded and it takes much persistence to upset him. Kyoshi believes, having lived through a cruel past, that he might be killed if he relaxed or let his guard down. Even with his friends beside him, however, he never truly let go of this worry, and his friends quietly accepted this. However, despite how cynical and asocial he outwardly behaved, Kyoshi exposed his good inner nature in casual moments. He could not hide his true feelings. Although his friends described him as "easily not deceived and honest to a fault" and "able to understand the subtleties of the human spirit", his personality was difficult to dislike. Kyoshi is extremely susceptible to spells and trickery, and has a blunt, almost brutal honesty about most things, which was why he often seemed to be quiet and separated to others.



"Until she'd left for good..."

History:
(Sorry if this is choppy, I'm writing this while incredibly tired. Sorta-ish.)
Kyoshi was born in the Wasure forest. He was the oldest of two siblings; one sister and one brother. But, his parents believed he was the most disappointing out of the three. He never had the thrill of the hunt like his other siblings did, he never wanted to truly accept what he really was. He wanted to live a 'simple and peaceful life', he wanted to defy what he was brought into this world to do; hunt. Kill. Feast. He never wanted to be a part of any of it. In making this decision, his parents constantly beat him, and it was brutal. And his greatest fear was that nobody ever cared that this ever happened to him, as his siblings never comforted him, and his parents seemed to take pleasure in the torturing. He was tortured every time he refused to admit what he was really supposed to be. And all of this was going on from his young teens all the way until his late teens. As you could imagine, constant torture could mess up this animal's mental state, if not cause permanent damage.

But, when Kyoshi was born, he was treasured as the pack's first son. Their heir. He was most loved by his parents. They treated him greatly, and nearly gave him whatever he wanted. He was completely spoiled. His parents always went hunting, providing food for the entire three person family. And when he was six, his younger sister was born. She didn't receive as much attention because the females couldn't be heirs to the family in their eyes, but they stilled loved her nonetheless. When Kyoshi hit 10 years old, his parents had another child, this time a boy. They treated him as well, if not more loving then they did Kyoshi. His younger sister always felt left out, growing sorta distant from the family. But there was one thing she'd always excelled at; hunting. She was the best out of the three- next being Kyoshi's brother, then Kyoshi. Kyoshi's parents soon grew a large frustration for him as he always refused to hunt. He thought that life was worth living, and we shouldn't decide if something dies. This caused the constant torture, this one thing. He never understood why is parents did this, he was refusing a way of life.... No harm in that, right?

Soon Kyoshi's sister grew tired of the constant beatings of Kyoshi, everything. She wanted to escape, she wanted nothing to do with the family. The killing obsessed parents, and those kin who refused to kill were beaten vigorously. So, she ran away for good. The only obedient child in the pack now was the youngest brother. He had listened to his parent's every command. Now that Kyoshi found out his sister had run away, he chased after her, desperate not to lose his greatest friend. He spent several days and nights searching for his sister to no avail. He then continued his search up for several weeks. In this time, he learned that he needed his hunting abilities to survive. So, he learned everything he needed to, and became a full-fledged predator. He then one day found his sister.... Dead. Her bloodied corpse was lying in the grass. A note beside her read, They got to me before I could get away fast enough. If anyone is reading this, avoid any of our race in this area. My parents slaughtered me... Leaving me barely breathing. If you found this, run. Run away.

Several years pass
Kyoshi could still not deal with the loss of his sister even after many years. And because of what that note written near her body said, he now has trouble trusting anybody of ANY race.

Powers:
Standard Predator Communication.
Hunter's intellect: Enhanced Agility, Stamina, Speed, Strength, Reflexes.

Strengths: Kyoshi's physical strenght can consider him a monster in combat. He's extremely fast, deadly, strong, and quiet. This causes him to be the hunter that he is, his greatest strength. Also, he makes bonds rather easily, meaning if any of his friend's lives are in danger, he'd 'risk it all.'

Weaknesses: Due to Kyoshi's lack of intelligence towards magic, and his body's natural lack of repellent against it, he is extremely vulnerable to most magic. And, mainly because of him relying on physical combat, up against a magical user, he's nearly defenseless.



"In which I'd learned to cope with everything."

Likes:
-Eating
-Sleeping
-Finding 'worthy challenges'

Dislikes:
-Those who dare to ruin others' lives
-Those who threatens anyone's lives.

Relationship Status: Free
Sexuality : Heterosexual

Other: None

Something seems fishy about that, huh?