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Hi I am working on a full-length young adult fantasy novel. I'm in desperate need of proofreading and feedback of the story, plot line, characters etc. I am trying to get it published so I need to have it cleaned up a little before I can send to a literary agent. Basically I need someone to be my sounding board as I finish up anyone who is interested please message me I will send you the first chapter and we can go from there. Much appreciated, Chandra below is the summary of my novel so you can have a better idea of what it is about.17 year old Charlotte O'Connor and her older brother Christophe are descendants of The Covenant. Ever since the death of their mother they have been taught to kill things that go bump in the night even going as far as using magic to do it. When their father is kidnapped by the number one enemy of The Covenant she turns to Caleb a cocky rich boy who has a secret can she trust him to help find her father before time runs out?
Hi I am working on a full-length young adult fantasy novel. I'm in desperate need of proofreading and feedback of the story, plot line, characters etc. I am trying to get it published so I need to have it cleaned up a little before I can send to a literary agent. Basically I need someone to be my sounding board as I finish up anyone who is interested please message me I will send you the first chapter and we can go from there. Much appreciated, Chandra below is the summary of my novel so you can have a better idea of what it is about.17 year old Charlotte O'Connor and her older brother Christophe are descendants of The Covenant. Ever since the death of their mother they have been taught to kill things that go bump in the night even going as far as using magic to do it. When their father is kidnapped by the number one enemy of The Covenant she turns to Caleb a cocky rich boy who has a secret can she trust him to help find her father before time runs out?
