Annie’s Comments (group member since Apr 07, 2009)

Annie’s comments from the You Write the Story group.

cool! good job Himi and Squishyblue!

yah ok i think we have enough names. :) ill make a poll out of some of them and then we can vote. the poll will be open for a few days and ill announce the winning names on here.

we still need to came up with names of secondary characters and pics of the characters.

so, if you can, put pics up here, with their link. we'll have a poll for them later

perfect rachel :)


cool names krista!

coolio

Nice names Himi!

Thanks Rachel!

Thanks for the input Krista!

cool! awesome names!

also, rachel, thanks for the cool website!

i like anthea for the girl and andile or antinon for the boy. the names seem to fit their personalities. :)

no just first names for now

ok so you like the summary?

come up with some names too. :)

wow great ideas guys! i love all of them. ok heres kind of a new summary of the story based on the ideas.

the girl lives with her mean/evil aunt and uncle. because her life is so bad, she escapes into this imagination land and lives there in her imagination. she meets her prince (cinderella story). but, since all her real life acquaintances are in her imagination, (the prince is one of her friends in real life) her aunt and uncle are in it too. they are the villains. so, she, her prince, the magical creatures of her land, and the other magical people in that land (they could actually be real life people as well, transferred into her dream) band together to defeat her evil aunt and uncle. in the real world, the girl stays in a coma for her whole life, since she defeats her evil aunt and uncle in the imaginary world and decides to keep living there.

also, i think that all the people that are mirrored in her imaginary world from the real world should have different names than the names of themselves in the real world. does that make sense?

last, i think that the girl's name and the boy's name should be something more relevant than their characters. lets say a bunch of names for the boy and for the girl, then i'll gather them up into a poll and we can all vote on them.

what do you think?

hello all new people! welcome to the group!

hmmmm thats good too :)

cool! :)

I have another idea while we're waiting...it's probably gonna sound lame, but we could make this a kind of Cinderella story. Her prince is in the imagination land, and she keeps getting jerked out of the imagination land, back into the real world. What do you think?

wow! great job!

thanks! :)

hmmm those are some awesome ideas! love them!!!

ok, also, we need to get some more people in this discussion, so invite your friends :)

:)

Wow! That is an amazing idea, Rachel! Thank you for posting! Would anyone else like to add anything?

Well...i dont think thats a place....