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BANG!!! that was the sound of Anna dropping all of her books on the floor in 2nd period,math! witch was the strictest teacher in Plubith High School.Mr.Max. She had no friends to help her once so ever she was alone in a dark world. Her dad is in jail for child abuse and her mom died when she was three no one told her why or what happend. She now lives with foster parents that she calls mom and dad not knowing her real parents at all. So she is stuck picking up all those papers by her self while Mr.Max is yelling at her for dropping all those papers.Anna finally picked up all the papers than left for lunch period. Lunch was a hour long and she sat by her self every day in a bathroom stall. But today everything changed. Anna was get her food and as clumsy as she is she dropped the apple she was looking for it when the boy behind her yelled "hey lady hurry up what are you doing down their searching for a penny?" thats when she said "ops im so- in then this guy named James said "hey dude leave her alone how about you pick on some one your own size". Anna was stunned she instantly fell in love. They finally got out of the line when James said "so the names James whats yours? she said "um ya um hi ya um ....... Anna?" "oh cool hey wanna sit by me at lunch today?' "Ya totally" she said trying to act normal. So they sat together. They sat next to eachother for the past three weeks and then he finnaly asked her out she said YES!!!!!! they were to love birds in a happy tree. For once she felt open and not in the dark no more. Every day after school Anna would run home get dressed is something pretty and go out into the world with her new boyfriend. It was their 3 month anaverceriy and James brought her a card, flower, and a necklace
. All Anna did was cry realy hard. And of corse James asked 'whats wrong?" Anna said nothing and ran away. When she got to her house she laid on her bed with tears in her crying like crazy. Her foster mom ran in the room. She said "whats going on on did he brea- "no Ana inturupted im sick realy sick dont you remember?". Her mother ran to the bed and started to cry "i know we will get through this trust me sweety you are completley safe. When are you going to tell hi-" "NEVER!" Anna inturupted again "never!." Her mom hugged her you need to tell him soon you onley have a week left of your freedom than you will have to go to the hospital for a while. thats when Anna sat up dried her tears and ran out the door. Right as she opend the door she saw him walking up her driveway with her gifts. she ran to him and gave him u hug.
"follow me i have to tell you something kindof inportant". "Ok" he said. They both ran to the park a cople streets away from her house. They sat down "can you tell me whats going on please'! Ya so we cant go out no more". Whaqt why!?!! " 'i have canser im going to die in the next five weeks". Anna said crying loudley James froze He hugged her and teard up telling her everything is going to be okay. I have only one week of schol left untill I go to the hospital.
That whole week was a silent week Anna dinit realy talk to james and JAmes all he did wasn talk to Anna. It was the night before she went to the hospital. She was laying on her bed staring at the necklace James gave her When her mom called her name to come eat dinner. She stood up and then fainted her mom yelled her name three more times then came up to get her. "honey i told you to come down three times and yo-.She oppend the door and froze "Frank! she screamed loudly crying. Frank ran up the stairs as fast as he could when he noticed that Anna was on the floor they drove to the hospital going over the speed limit at 105. As soon as they got their the doctors ruched Anna to the emergency room. Her mom and dad had to ewait in the waiting room. About three hours later Doctor Kim came out with a clipboard and a sad face she said "im so sorry" Frank and her foster mom started crying screaming loudly. It was a verry rough night they stade their all night crying. About four AM they went home. The plan was to take Anna to the hospital at six Sunday morning and that James was going to be their at 6am to come with. So James came and came as planned he dong the door bell about 10 times praying they dinit leave yet. Frank answered the door and started tearing up "{im teribly sorry she pas- passed away.
James mind was spinning around and around untill he fell. He screamed "NO THIS CANT BE HAPPENING NO SHE CANT SHE CAN!!!!!!!!! "Im so sorry" Jame- NO SHE CANT BE GONE HE RAN to the hospital on feet witch took him about three hours but he still made it. He looked sick very sick he fainted in the hospitals waiting room. he doctors ran to get him and put him in Emegencery room. Then he said in a week voice "good bye world" then "beeeeeeeeeeppppppp" is all you herd. They both died withen 24hrs. They had their funneral on the same day. millions of people showed up and sat for hours hearing about this couple. Every year they would have a long lost caring for them they would it "A Leap Of Faith'.
