Alexis’s Comments (group member since Jan 06, 2015)

Alexis’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

"I’m going to let you know right now that I have a black belt in Taekwondo. I also don’t feel pain and I feel little emotion. I don’t know where you’re taking me or what you want with me, but let those two statements influence your next moves.”
Despite moving halfway around the world, Atsuko Haruno finds little comfort in her new home. Working double time as the President and CEO of one of the largest companies in Japan, and as a student at the notorious Sunbeam High School for the Rich and Privileged, her move has been nothing but a burden.

Alexander Irie lives a life of lies. Despite being widely popular, only four people know his secret. When he pushes himself into Atsuko's life, he soon finds that he's not the only one with a secret to hide. Will they be able to get past their differences and be there for each other when they need it the most?

http://www.wattpad.com/144241824-what...

NATM-LOVER wrote: "Outer angle measurement."

Ah, I get it. It took me a bit to get that. We just started the new semester with ratios and proportions.

NATM-LOVER wrote: "Word problems are the worst. They give no picture and they have to equal to 180 ."

Is it a triangular problem? Like, find the angle measurements? I ask because every triangle is equal to 180 degrees.

Kamiko wrote: "Okay, so I have a friend someone who I've known since first grade, but I became best friends with her just this year.

So anyway, there are these two people I've known since kindergarten, and I've..."

I know how you feel. I was the smart kid when I went to regular school, and it seemed like everyone was only my friend because I could give them the answers that they didn't want to know.

NATM-LOVER wrote: "Because Geometry is HARD!"

Really? I'm taking geometry this year, and compared to algebra last year, I love it! Maybe I can help you?

I swore too! Sorry! Still getting used to this group!

Yeah, right! I am currently going through this problem and don't know how to fix it...

Don't you just love it when someone is super pissed at you, and you have no clue what you did even though they insist that 'you know'?

Kamiko wrote: "I posted a comment on your story, it's really good so far!"

I saw that, and thanks so much! I'm so glad that you like it!

Marie wrote: "I have seriously never heard of Wattpad."

Really? Well, if you're a writer or trying to be, it's pretty good. I like Goodreads best for keeping track of what books I read, conversations, and getting book reccomendations. I used to just write in Goodreads, but then I found Wattpad. You can write all your stories in Wattpad and on Goodreads. I love it so far. It tells you how many people have read your stories and such, though you have to be careful and watch your stuff because it doesn't really give the option for spell check. Other than that, I absolutely adore it. You should check it out.

Okay, I have a couple of stories out, but the one I am really focused on writing right now is called What is Love. I have like 4 chapters up, but I'm adding more and more each day. I'm mostly writing it on Wattpad, but might add it to Goodreads as well.

http://www.wattpad.com/92941531-what-...

The reason I'm posting on here to advertise is because I could really use some constructive criticism. But I can take it! The criticism I mean. I can understand if you like or hate the story, but please leave a comment saying if you liked or didn't, and what it was that you liked, or did not like. If you liked it, please like!
Thanks!

Ivy wrote: "I think it shouldnt matter what the other people think. just write for yourself and no longer pine for the attention. :)"

I know what you mean, but that isn't what I'm doing. I write to write. I just loooovvvveeee to write, and if I think an idea is good, I just write it down. :) I'm not really trying to get a lot of attention, I mean, yeah, it's always nice when people read my stories, and maybe one day I'll get published, but when someone reads the story and doesn't say anything, it just makes it a bit frustrating because I just looooovvveee constructive criticism. It shows me that people care enough to say, hey, maybe make this smoother, or reword that sentence for a better feeling. :D

Haha. When I read I like to comment, just because I know how it feels when it happens to me. I just want to pull my hair out when that happens! I mean, it isn't like you have to comment on every sentence, but like at least one comment at the beginning of the story, and if you liked it, like the story. Otherwise, how is the author supposed to know???

Kamiko wrote: "Alexis wrote: "Maj wrote: "@Alexis; I know... It's like
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Lol, right! Especially on Wattpad, because it tells you that people have read it, but not who or when."

The story of my life...."

Like, it feels like people are doing you a huge favor for actually reading your story, but at the same time, It's like, pleaaassseee! I need to know! Did you like it or not????

Betti wrote: "I'm stressed. School stuff. They expect very much from me, saying I can do it, and maybe yes, but with what cost? I'm exhausted in all ways."

OH MY GOD, I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL!

Maj wrote: "@Alexis; I know... It's like
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Lol, right! Especially on Wattpad, because it tells you that people have read it, but not who or when.

That feeling when it shows that someone's been reading your stories, but hasn't left one comment to tell whether they liked it or not, and you're about to tear your hair out trying to figure out if you're a good writer or not...

Not exactly what I had in mind, but I like it! Thanks a lot! It's great!

Nope, not really. Here's a description.

Atsuko Haruno, the fun loving bookworm, is thrown into the world of wealth after her father dies. Forced to move to Japan where her only other family resides above Mary-Lou's Tea Shop, it seems like a fresh start for Atsuko. But that all changes when she opens her locker door.

Atsuko Haruno, you've been Selected.

A term given to the lowest of low, Atsuko is thrown into the horrible reality of attending Sunbeam High. She's picked on, teased and bullied, all because of TK, four of the most notorious men of the school. What happens when she starts falling for Alexander, the rudest and richest of all?

It's by Alexis Hoffman. Oh and it's called What is Love.

Hey, that's good! Do you think you could do one for my story?