arabella’s Comments (group member since May 04, 2014)

arabella’s comments from the The Edits, and Everything Else! group.

In general I love the poem I think they are great.

Cool story I really like it

Hey I told you I was going to give feedback so here I am (I've had an extremely LONG summer) I'm sorry I couldn't get here recently but here I am. I love this story so much! It's perfect

"Yσυ кησω уσυ ℓσνє α ρєяѕση ωнєη ιт нυятѕ тσ ѕαу gσσ∂вує σηє ℓαѕт тιмє."

Hι∂ιηg ƒяσм тнє мσηѕтєяѕ υη∂єя уσυя вє∂ ιѕ ιηєνιтαвℓє, ℓιкє σвℓινιση вєcαυѕє ѕσση єνєяутнιηg ωιℓℓ вє gσηє ѕσмє∂αу...

" Hєя ℓσνє ƒσя нιм ωαѕ ѕσ gяєαт тнαт ιƒ ѕнє cσυℓ∂ cσυηт тнє ѕтαяѕ тнєяє ωσυℓ∂ вє αη ιηƒιηιту мσяє ƒσя нσω gяєαт тнαт ℓσνє ωαѕ."

Tнє тнιηg αвσυт ραιη ιѕ тнαт ιт ∂ємαη∂ѕ тσ вє ƒєℓт ~ Jσнη Gяєєη, Tнє Fαυℓт Iη Oυя Sтαяѕ

Thanks!:)

Hey can I post quotes here to??

Not really I'm going to PM you

No he didn't

Bored

Eh, boyfriend broke up with me. I'm okay I guess.

First attempt at a rhyming poem. I don't know if it's good,but here goes...





Time






Damn time and her keepers.
Damn the weepers.

Time can rhyme and make love stories about quarries, rivers and lakes of tears.

Quivering souls that reach out for life long loves. Mourning doves that provide warning of grief.

Thieves who are time's keepers thief happiness from the weepers.

Time's keepers deluded the weepers into taking Time for granite.

Aww. I loved this story. It's amazing the way you put words together. Love this. :)

Yes I did:)

Wow. I loved the way you captured the character's thoughts. He just wanted someone to be nice to him and now he's higher than them. I loved the way you captured it, it flowed like poetry. I loved it.

I can give feedback

Hey I'd love it if I got some feedback on my thread Belle's fantasies♥️,my writing ♥️. Thx hope you can give me feedback.

Oh okay:)