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Sentence story (282 new)
Mar 25, 2014 09:22PM

128056 the red sky began turning a sickly green, flashing with purple and yellow almost like the aurora borealis.
All Night Diner (558 new)
Mar 25, 2014 09:20PM

128056 youre with friends, and i cant speak for fangs but when it comes to me, crazy empathizes with crazy, im with ya ash. if i could id give you a hug through the screen, though that might be stumbling into horror movie territory.
Mar 25, 2014 09:19PM

128056 yeah, in my experience people who have to deal with the worst of the drug life build up walls. walls with windows, they can be open for sensitivity, but the walls are incredibly tough and hard to breach. they can be breached though, you can make a door to let certain people in. it just takes a while. youll get there though, i have faith in ya
Mar 25, 2014 09:16PM

128056 its pretty good i must say. i havent watched many docs about ww1, mainly ww2 as there is so much more footage, much more documentary worthy shots. ww1 is mainly pictures and snippets of video. this is definitely the best ive seen tho
All Night Diner (558 new)
Mar 25, 2014 09:13PM

128056 ah its only one sentence at a time, you can do that. think about it. your addition would be greatly appreciated :) plus 3 writers will get through it quicker than 2
The Waiting Room (111 new)
Mar 25, 2014 09:12PM

128056 yea i could see that, or perhaps the woman, adler, is actually rani. id like them to bring back rani, a homicidal madwoman timelord, whats not to like.
Mar 25, 2014 09:11PM

128056 im glad that you found us in your isolation :)
Sentence story (282 new)
Mar 25, 2014 09:09PM

128056 "there is no way to save yourself i am afraid, a singularity has been opened near your sun, its only a matter of..." he stopped abruptly. "something is wrong."
Mar 25, 2014 09:06PM

128056 bbc the first world war, based on a book by a guy whos name i dont remember, lol. but its a 10 part series, im on part 2.
All Night Diner (558 new)
Mar 25, 2014 09:05PM

128056 lol all right, well i will let you know when we get to a chapters worth, or you let me know when you feel like weve made it to the end. ash you should join in, you are very welcome and with your anime love i bet youve got some great ideas.
The Waiting Room (111 new)
Mar 25, 2014 09:04PM

128056 hmm that would be a tough one, im thinking alien hounds of the baskervilles? lol. theres always moriarty, what if moriarty was really the master.
Mar 25, 2014 09:03PM

128056 ouch, that is indeed rough. and i know theres nothing that can be said to help with that kinda hurt. at least though you are in a position to help others from having the same tragic end. i wish i had the patience for it, but unfortunately i dont think id last too long before smacking some crackhead in the face and telling him to get his shit together, lol.
The Waiting Room (111 new)
Mar 25, 2014 08:59PM

128056 lol absolutely, i can see them trying to out deduce each other at every moment. trying to show the other who is smarter, it would be a great show for sure.
Mar 25, 2014 08:58PM

128056 watching a ww1 documentary.
All Night Diner (558 new)
Mar 25, 2014 08:56PM

128056 absolutely. when we get to what feels like a chapters worth im thinking of posting it here, under both our names if i can. if not i can send you the file to post so you get the credit, its all your idea id say. just give me a little note at the beginning, lol. either way id like to post it chapter by chapter if we get that far. it would be pretty cool to write a whole book, even though itll take quite a while, lol.
Sentence story (282 new)
Mar 25, 2014 08:54PM

128056 she wanted to follow his gaze to the sky but she noticed for the first time he wasnt fully there, as if he were a hologram or a ghost.
Mar 25, 2014 08:52PM

128056 ah ive been known to have abused a substance or two, i certainly know that world. that unpleasantness will absolutely eat you alive, i have a lot of respect for you, people in your profession that are just in it to help. even though what you are fighting leaves such horror in its wake. what you are feeling is completely understandable. now i really hope you are able to get some sleep, a good solid 6-8 hours will make such a difference.
All Night Diner (558 new)
Mar 25, 2014 08:49PM

128056 yea its always good to at a little heartbreak to your tale.
the one sentence story thing is coming along nicely fangs, im enjoying it. havent written a story like this before, lol. ive been compiling it, we are up to almost 2 pages :)
Sentence story (282 new)
Mar 25, 2014 08:46PM

128056 "who are your people?" she asked
Sentence story (282 new)
Mar 25, 2014 08:37PM

128056 she looked at him pleadingly, begging him to tell her why the world seems to be falling into destruction.