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so you dont have enough pink now? lol, i understand, in high school i had many different colours of hair, the bright ones like blue and red always faded so quickly.

"humans?" she asked quietly, her nerve seemingly to have failed her.

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yea its a good call, i just went with a pic of me tho. its the only one i have, lol. i will probably update it if i ever have another picture of myself.

she was silent for a moment, taking in those brief but harsh words. "a purge of what?" she said finally.

its a good talent to have thats for sure, tho it must be a lot tougher to use it over the anonymity of the internet

ooh very nice pic indeed fangs. what made you go for a change?

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lol no rush at all, youll always be fangs to me

yea its definitely more of a poison then bud thats for sure. but we all know what happens if you deny people their alcohol, lol, the 30s have some very interesting tales to scare us off that idea again.

"what happened to earth?"

my pleasure ash. im here for ya, even though i dont really know ya, same goes for you too fangs. even though i dont know your name, lol. fangs is good enough for me tho :) im glad you like the last name. weve started the story with a bang, time for a little explanation perhaps? might have to sleep on it depends on how the next few sentences go, im definitely startin to drop off, lol.

yea fangs i hear ya, pills suck indeed, but they do help i think. the right ones. they certainly work better then doing nothing at all. and yea ash, one day it will be so sweet. america is warming to the idea from what ive been hearing lately. but it isnt even legal here in canada, i dont even think its decriminalized anymore :( everyone still smokes though, if you have ever seen trailer park boys they have got it pretty much right, at least for the east coast. here in toronto its a little more flashy, but pretty much the same deal, lol.

we just hit the 5 page mark :) i hope you dont mind i gave her a last name, named after river song of course. if you dont like it tho i can edit it out no problem.

while waiting for him to collect his thoughts she got her first look at a new universe, something julia rivers has dreamed of since she first looked up at the stars.

yea, i dont like the sleeping pills but you gotta do what you gotta do, i got the strongest weak pills i could get, lol. i used to have a major pill problem, so im always wary of it and what im taking. the maryjane tho is par for the course, i am canadian after all :)

sweet, it is coming along nicely, we are almost up to 5 pages all spaced out properly with indentation and proper paragraph structure :) and it seems we each have a very different idea of what the story is going to be, lol, you definitely seem to have a more fairy tale ish almost romantic style, i definitely see the manga coming out of you. im more of an apocalyptic type guy, i love the horror, so be prepared for some scary situations, lol

for the first time since her last blissful moment of peace in the park she decided to be in control of the situation.

im quite liking our story fangs. two completely different people with different ideas each writing a sentence, lol, theres so much that can be done with it. would it be terribly against the rules if i used two sentences from now and then? just in case i have a thought i want to expand on?

"no." she replied firmly.