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just started Breaking News: An Autozombiography, a good fun zombie story to get the taste of the alchemist out of my mouth, lol. im very much enjoying it so far, i loves me a good outbreak story
cool, i will spell check and proof read then post it up, or would you like me to send you a copy first so you can check it out. always good to have a second set of eyes go over a work
what do you think about calling the disappearing room the end of chapter one? its about 8 pages so far :)
she blinked and the room was gone, she was standing in a seemingly endless empty space with a thick fog covering the ground.
"we stopped counting thousands of years before i was born im afraid. as long as there has been existence, there has been unbalance and chaos. that is what you are facing." he looked genuinely sad for once.
"you are not the only sentient beings in existence human, we try to save them all, or at least their life sustaining planets."
