ari [elle’s vrsn 🩵] [semi ia]’s Comments (group member since Dec 09, 2024)

ari [elle’s vrsn 🩵] [semi ia]’s comments from the poetryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy group.

we’re writers. we bleed our feelings onto paper 🫠😀

ah, being vulnerable with ppl on the internet 😂

something is wrong
why am i the only one who sees it?
something is wrong
someone has to see it…
my skin is crawling
my throat is screaming
i can’t be the only one who sees it…
something is wrong
i think i’m going to be sick
my hands are shaking
please tell me someone can see it
it’s all a lie
all a lie
all a lie
is everyone blind?
why can’t they see it?
all a lie
all a lie
my throat is dry
i lick my lips
please someone see it
i trusted him
all a lie
all a lie
i curl my knees up to my chest
i want to scream
i want to cry
i want to please
i want to make someone believe me
all a lie
all a lie
something is wrong
nothing is wrong.
i fake a smile
i am delusional
everything is right
all a lie
all a lie

TY GUYS 😭😭

help the typo- it’s KNEW not knee 🤦‍♀️

he held her
through it all, he held her
his throat moaned in agony. his chest as tight as a bowstring
any moment
any moment that string would snap
any moment
he froze
she stirred
still, he held her
his muscles screamed at him, but he refused to let go
the wind howled, whipping his face and cloak, but he refused to let go
he could let go
couldn’t let go…
she was too precious, too precious, too precious
she was everything
everything but his
he swallowed the needles in his throat
pain was all he knew
pain was his only friend
pain never left
everything but his….
she could never be his
and the pain in knowing that knee no bounds

oh okay good 🫠

no way 😭 the strikeouts didn’t work. that’s a key part of the poem 😭😭😭

stuck stuck stuck
i can’t catch my breath
my hands clench into fists
my heart thump thump thumping
i can’t breathe
there’s a pressure in my chest
i can’t breathe
they stand behind me
watching watching watching
waiting waiting waiting
for me to slip up
i can’t breathe
i can’t do anything without them
knowing knowing knowing
without them
yelling yelling yelling
i can’t breathe
i can’t breathe
i can’t breathe
i’m not my own
i can’t do anything
yelling
wont someone turn it down?
wont someone stop the yelling, crying, screaming?
yelling
i can’t breathe
tears
i can’t breathe
pain
i can’t breathe
are you okay?
no i’m not okay
i’m fine. i’m fine. i’m fine.
im not fine
no one can hear me crying
i can’t breathe
im fine

YALL IM SOBBING OVER THESE POEMS