Jupiter (previously charis) (God’s Version ✝️)’s Comments (group member since Dec 08, 2024)

Jupiter (previously charis) (God’s Version ✝️)’s comments from the poetryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy group.

l i z [save the sharks‼️] wrote: "They told us politics was power
Wrapped in suits and titles and tradition,
Shaped in marble halls and sealed with pens.

But they forgot to mention that real power has always lived in the hearts o..."

DAAAANG THIS ATE

tick, tick, tick
with every moment gone
the tasks piles on
you're caught in a trance
to scared to advance
body frozen in fear
wondering how you could end up here
the energy needed to start
got locked inside your heart
steadily picking up the pace
you can hear your blood say

tick tick tick
your breath picks up
your head too full of stuff
it screams at you to begin
to go ahead and jump in
but there's too much noise
too much stress
and then all of the sudden
there's a pain in your chest

tick tick tick
the room becomes a cage
you hear the echoes of its rage
you try to move and escape
but the pain is like duct tape
binding you to your thoughts
weighing you down like rocks

tick tick tick
time is almost up
the deadline draws near
the one thing on your mind?
hollow eyes in a mirror

tick tick tick
we failed.
sht

tick tick tick.

gosh I have to catch up on reading so many poems XD

You

i would lose my sleep for you
even if the next day
my brain felt like goo
i will lose my sleep for you

i would talk to you for hours
because you need strength
so take some of my power
i will talk to you for hours

i would hold your hand
to keep you grounded
when you seem far away from land
i will hold your hand

i would cry with you to sleep
it helps to let it all out
to bring you peace throughout the week
i will cry with you to sleep

i would hold you forever
to give you the home you need
and make you feel light as a feather
i will hold you forever

i would love you for eternity
no reason-just because
we'll make our own found family
i will love you for eternity

aww eva that's amazing 🥹

@autumn woah that's cool and relatable

@sophiaTheSecond that's so real 😭

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this is so true and so sad T_T

AWWW VI THAT WAS AMAZING

omgosh that's amazing and so relatable 😭😭😭

the premise is really good but u feel like it doesnt flow?? like the sentences were choppy and i couldn't find a rhythm to say the words in. still good tho!!!

@ lillian @ari thank y'all 🥲

that's so beautiful

walls

how can you expect me to grow
when you keep reminding me of my failures

i know the worst parts of myself,
you don't have to remind me

i think about them everyday

i love you
were here to help
we feel your pain

at least that's what you say
but so far your only adding
not taking away

move on
keep going
it will get better
let us help you

your irresponsible, neglectful, apathetic
why are you depressed and anxious?
don't you know better than that??

but you said this was normal
you said it was fine
your supposed to be helping
not making me cry

i sit in silence
while the world moves around me

what's wrong?
what's up with you?
why aren't you talking?

because i'm mad
angry
frustrated
hurt

no....
don't tell them
they've only made it worse
keep quiet
keep it inside
deal with it later

tell us
we're here to help you
we love you
you can't get up until you speak

i shout

"you know forcing her won't make it better"

but we've done all we can

"no, you might be making it worse"

i thought i was saved

shut up
you said

.....oh

that's enough
that's not how you were raised

never mind

this isn't abuse
but it isn't nutriment either
a house full of love
and yet i'm forced to be a survivor

i shouldn’t have to hide here,
i’m supposed to be safe
yet silence consumes me,
i live my life as a wraith

the walls that should bring me shelter,
only echo my pain
i sit and stare at the wall
while i listen to the pat-patter of rain

OH SHOOT U REMINDED MY I NEVER POSTED WALLS ON HERE HOLDUP

aww violet 🥺 girlie you are so amazing and i know me just telling you that won't fix the problem, but know that it's true 🫶

DANG THE CHILLS THAY JUST RUSHED UP MY ARMS

THANK YOU LOND!!! AND YOURS IS GREAT TOO!!!!

and that's okay lilz!!! whatever your comfy with!!

Lillian wrote: "i wrote a poem but idk if i want to share it.... like idk if its any good.... i might but idk"

you should!! even if it sucks I love reading poetry

thank you lilz!!!! 😭🫶