✨Arielle (Queen of the stars)✨ on semi-hiatus’s Comments (group member since Jan 03, 2024)

✨Arielle (Queen of the stars)✨ on semi-hiatus’s comments from the Chat, Read and Write! group.

How is everyone doing?

Hi everyone!

Welcome to the group!

Taylor, what were you asking about my story? I think i missed it.

Cool! I also should update goodreads more often, i read a bunch of pages today and forgot to update the book on here.

Hello everyone! I have been writing a dystopian story and i was wondering if anyone would want to peer edit.
Just pm me or let me know here. I after that i will give you more information. Thanks!

Hi! I am so happy you posted this story. It is really good and I like the plot a lot.

Potentially to make it better you could add more descriptive language to show how annoying the main character is with his immortality. Also you might want to change up the way the MC talks because they sort of sound like they live in the present day. I don’t know if that was on purpose or not. Also maybe more descriptive about what things look like.

Overall so far, it’s really good and I am excited to read more!

I also might post a bit of my story later this week!

Welcome!

Cool! I don’t think i have read that yet. I am reading one of us is next right now.

Hi! Welcome to the group!

I used to play piano, but now i sing.

Fun!

I’m good! What are you doing rn?

Hello! How are you guys doing?

helloooo!

Welcome! Thank you for joining! I also really like the Riordanverce. Have you seen the new percy jackson show?

Talk about anything really and have fun!

Talk about books you have read or start a group read!

Hi guys! Put anything you wrote in here. Please specify if you just want it to be read or some constructive criticism. Thanks!

Oh wait i forgot to introduce myself. lol.

My name is arielle, i am in highschool, and i love reading writing and doing art. Some of my favorite stories are the kotlc, agggtm, the hunger games, the unwind series, and in deeper waters. It’s so nice to meet all of you, and i hope to chat even more!