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((i mean which part are you using? the betrothal title?))

((which part?))

“Exactly! it’s good because then she didn’t have to deal with him and yes it’s arranged by my aunt and his mother,” Ravyn says bluntly glaring at Cairo.

“Again this is your fault and if i recall correctly when this first happened you said ‘people die young’,” he says.

“And so they do,” she begins. “But you can’t prove—“

“Will you two cut it out,” interrupted Forest. “ It’s enough i have to deal with you at home, if you actually tried to get along i think you’d find you like each other.”

“Yeah that’s not happening,” Cairo says.

“I actually don’t know anyone magical Felix but least i can deal with the idea of magic and ghosts without having a panic attack,” Ravyn says earning a elbow in the stomach from Forest.

“Ravyn if we’re going to work together we need to not fight, i think that would be best,” he says with his warning tone.

“Yeah well me and him are betrothed and we still hate each other,” Ravyn says pointing at Cairo then covering her mouth, she hadn’t meant to say that.

“I prefer the title ‘temporarily having to deal with each other until i fix your mess’,” Cairo says blankly.

Quinley wrote: "KC wrote: "(I've been reading this- wHat iS It????? bc I'm just dying to know over here~)"

(I actually don't know-- But we'll both soon find out. ;) )"

KC wrote: "(I've been reading this- wHat iS It????? bc I'm just dying to know over here~)"

((yeah i guess we'll find out))

Ravyn smirked. "You feel it don't you? It's probably watching us right now so if you don't believe in ghosts right now you probably will soon."
"Ravyn leave the guy alone," Forest says with a warning tone. "And no one's going to get sacrificed or eaten, alright? We're going to get out of here, for all we know the doors could be wide open and we're just overreacting." As he said it though Forest could feel what she was talking about. He shook it off, there were no ghosts

"Although we might have to kill the monster if there is one," Ravyn says. "Maybe we were sent here as a sacrifice to it and to survive we have to kill it before it eats us all." Of course Ravyn doesn't actually believe that but it's a fun idea.

Forest gives Ravyn a look. "Really Ray? Now is not the time for that."

"Well I agree with Ashford," Cairo says crossing his arms.

"Which Ashford?" Ravyn and Forest ask in sync.

Cairo just shakes his head and waves them off. "There's most likely something else living here. So we have two choices, find it or hide from it."

((it seems this castle is turning into the horror/thriller/mystery castle lol))

"So do I, something or someone has to be here," Ravyn agrees feeling it too. "And don't come from a world where magic is normal but it does exist even if it's rare but this place obviously has magic if we were sent here the way we were."

"So are we splitting up or sticking together?" asks Forest.

Cairo speaks up now. "No one should go alone if there's something in here but there's six of us so we can split into groups of two or three."

"Maybe, it certainly seemed magical," agrees Ravyn, she didn't have any other explanation for how they could just disappear and show up here.
"But why?" adds Forest. "Is this a test, a tournament? Are we supposed to find a way out or fight each other?"
"Last one standing wins and gets let out," Cairo suggests. "Solve a puzzle or riddle."
Ravyn groans softly. "Well we're not going to find out anything if we just stand here."

Forest held up his hands to show he didn't have any weapons in them. "I'm Forest and this is Cairo," he says calmly. "I believe you have my sister."

Cairo rolled his eyes, he liked Forest and all but sometimes you just have to be direct. "Do you know where we are? And why?"

Ravyn stepped forward. "Calm down Prince we don't know anything, we're just as confused as you. Forest have you seen anyone else? Or just him?" she said gesturing to Cairo with a small glare which he returned.

KC if you could post all of your characters here so they're all in one place that would be great

Forest and Cairo both froze then glanced at each other. They put their hands on their sword hilts and walked forward slower than before. It seemed they weren't alone after all.
"We just appeared here, do you know what this place is?" Forest asked speaking up but not saying their names.

Ravyn immediately recognized Forest’s voice. She turned to the others and said, "That's my brother but I don't know who he's with yet." Then she raised her voice. "Forest it's me, get over here and I'll explain." Ravyn felt somehow safer knowing Forest was here, it meant she wasn’t alone in a castle full of strangers.

The two young men both released a breath and dropped their hands from their sword hilts. Forest started walking a bit faster and rounded the corner with Cairo behind him. Ravyn was with three other people none of which looked the slightest bit familiar.

Ravyn watched their exchange with small smile. "I'm from Adria, it's somewhere far from here I'm guessing," Ravyn said. "How about you two..."
Ravyn trailed off, she thought heard voices in the hall behind her. Yep she definitely heard voices, two men and from the sound of it they were arguing rather loudly.

"We need to find Ravyn," Forest pressed. "She could need help."
"We don't even know if she's here, besides I'm sure she can take care of herself," Cairo said starting to walk away.
Forest followed him trying to shake off the weird feeling creeping up his spine. He'd just appeared here in this strange castle without a living thing in sight and then Cairo had come casually around corner as if nothing was wrong.

Ravyn relaxed a bit, these two didn't seem like they wanted to hurt her or Pheonix. "I'm Ravyn and this is Pheonix," she said gesturing to him. "So you have no idea where we are?"
Ravyn was hoping that she could get some answers from this but she doubted it. These two seemed just as confused as them.

((i can bring some more characters in if it won't get to complicated, i have Ravyns brother and Cairo who's complicated))

Kira (no last name yet) (K)
20ish (haven't decided yet) ~ Female ~ Straight ~ Castle 2.0

Mid length straight dark brown hair. Either violet or gray eyes (haven't decided yet), tan/soft olive complexion. 5’5

Kira was taken by in the empress after she took over her country when Kira was 7. Her father had died when she was 2 and she lived with her mother and older brother. During the attack the empress made sure anyone not fighting wasn't hurt but Kira got trapped in their house and a guard found her she fought back and he ended up almost killing her. Her brother pretty much abandoned her then and she hasn't seen him since but he is a rebel. The empress ended up seeing her spirit during the fighting and liked it. She would choose a young girl or two in each country she overthrew to give the opportunity to come to her palace train to be a great warrior and fighter basically like a ninja type person. But because she was so young she lived with her mother for a while longer and when she turned 12 she started her training with dozens of other girls. She became top of her class and is about to finish her training. I don’t have much personality except that she’s confident and loyal.

This whole book is about women's rights and equality. The empress is the first unmarried female ruler and women and girls basically didn’t have any rights before she took over. But it’s not like women are better than men and that stuff, but respect and equality both ways.

Ravyn tensed a little and hid her dagger in her sleeve. Better to be underestimated than attacked.
"No, we've been wondering the same thing," Ravyn called back as they approached. She glanced at Pheonix wondering if he might know these people because she certainly didn't.

i dont know who Zane Cohen is but i guess if that's what he looks like

Forest Ashford (For/Fore)
16 ~ Male ~ Straight ~ Castle 3.0

Dirty blond/ light brown hair that’s a bit on the longer side but still short. Light/tan complexion and electric blue eyes. 6 foot.

First born prince of the Adrian (Ad-ree-an) royal family he’s supposed to become king when he turns 18. He was taught how to fight from a young age and is a good swordsman but prefers not to take the violent way out. He’s basically a cinnamon roll and is really caring and kind. He’s an excellent people person and can easily calm a crowd, make speeches and other kingly stuff like that. He cares very deeply for his younger twin sister Ravyn and is always trying to get her to open up to people more and keep her out of trouble. Forest is rather goofy and fun too and always tries to look on the bright side. (he’s my baby <3)


Nikolaus (no last name yet) (Nik)
24 ~ Male ~ Straight ~ Castle 1.0

Wine red hair that’s a bit long and always messy. Gray eyes and a tan complexion, sharp jawline and strong features. 6’3 in height and well built but a bit lanky.

Grew up as the second born royal child with 1 older brother, 2 younger and a younger sister, their parents were assassinated when he was 21 and his oldest brother Alaric was 24, he took the throne and placed each of his siblings in high ranking either military or political roles. Nik became the commander of the navy. He’s carefree and rather playful and got along best with Adali as children and they were always causing trouble around the castle. He loves the ocean and fresh air and hates to be stuck inside. He’s basically a sailor and captains the strongest war ship in the fleet but still works alongside his crew. Nikolaus is cocky and confident.

Ravyn saw him tense then relaxe and realized that he was probably more scared than she was. “I was about to go find out when you showed up,” she says. “It sounded like they might know each other earlier so if you have anyone you might want to start looking, we have no idea how many people could be here.”

Ravyn herself would have to start looking for Forest, he was the only person she could actually trust. But was he here? She could take care of herself just fine without him, but still an ally would be nice.

Denali if you could post all your characters here so they're all in one place

Ravyn set her feet ready to either attack or run. She looked the man over, he seemed safe enough so Ravyn relaxed slightly lowering her dagger to her side.

“I don’t know where we are,” she says her voice steady. “My name is Ravyn, who are you?”